Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

That brought chuckles from the others, but they all stared at Manuel, and then to the new couple with complete respect in their eyes.~ this was very well written. I could 'see' it. feel it. Well done!!

I really liked how you ended this chapter. It flowed well from the beginning to the end. Your characters have depth and personality. You've done a great job of developing them.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020

Thank you!!! :)

I'm so glad you liked that scene. I love to bring out my characters personalities, and the good side is always my favorite. Thanks for mentioning that. :)
I have one more chapter to rap the story up and bring in a bigger smile because you know me ... I'm a sucker for a fairy tale ending. Plus, I've decided to show my cover for this book. My artist did a great job bringing the two main characters to life.

Thanks for taking the time to read my chapter and give me feedback. Your opinion means a great deal to me. You are the one who brought me here, remember? I can never thank you enough.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by rwilliam on 11-Feb-2020

You're welcome but I may have brought you here, but YOU did the work. YOU have the TALENT! And YOU are doing the work! I am so PROUD of you! :D

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thanks my friend! I'm proud of you, too! :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Fantastic closing, Ms Shana! I really thought you did a great job rapping up the story. All the pieces came together perfectly. I'm looking forward to the last chapter and your cover reveal! I hope this is not the end of your series. I'm pumped for more!

Nate

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thanks, Nate! :)

You've been such a great support here. I'm glad you haven't gotten tired of my Breedline adventures. I'm also looking forward to showcasing my book cover with the last chapter. Stay tuned my friend!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Such a beautiful and romantic ending to this chapter. I am very happy how things worked out for Ashton and Lailah as well as those who love them. The artwork you chose gets an A in my book. As always, look forward to your next posting.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I'm glad you liked the ending. I do have one more chapter that closes everything with a smile. I'm really looking forward to showcasing my book cover too! This book will hopefully be out in March. Still waiting on my editor to finish.

Thanks so much for your support and inspiring reviews.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 10-Feb-2020

You are ever so welcome, Shana, my friend. Looking forward to reading to reading it, though with some sadness, as this story comes to an end.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

You are a true romantic Dear Shana. I think that I might be too. All those years ago when I was a little boy, not that I was thinking so much quite like this, but it is similar, I was thinking of a much nicer world than what we presently live in, and I suspect you do just the same. You have all the skills and the knowledge of God's nature to write good stories, and a good report of these things, and the technical skills to go with those items! So well done my romantic friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you, Roy! :)

I love a good romance and a happy ending. Glad you do too! I wanted to end this chapter with God's forgiveness. Everyone has sins, and I want to show that His grace touches us all, even the biggest of sinners.
My last chapter will sum it up with a happy smile. Plus, I will reveal my book cover. Hopefully, this one will be out in March. Still waiting on my editor. I'm having to go back and republish my books myself. My publishing company is not reporting all my royalties. I don't like getting taken advantage of, but unfortunately, sometimes it happens.
Thanks for all your support and inspiring reviews!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 10-Feb-2020

Yes, the same thing happened to a friend of mine, she wrote children?s books and drew her own artwork, marvellous work, she lost everything. Well done, you?ll do well Shana, bless you. I?ll pray, congrats, Roy

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

What an emotional chapter. It's so warm, heartfelt, loves seems to be in the air for Jenna and Roman. Yet it was sad when Ash and Nicholas parted ways. That part made me cry. I could feel the love, bond the siblings have for each other. I love your bit of humor and the tease of a sultry encounter at the end. It's a very well-written, interesting start to finish. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

I'm so glad you thought this chapter was heartfelt. That was what I was going for! I love a good old-fashioned fairytale ending. The last chapter will rap it up with a big smile. Plus I will reveal my book cover. I'm so excited. My artist is awesome! Hopefully this book will be out in March. I'm having to publish this book and all the other four myself. My publishing company has not been turning in all my royalties. I hate getting taken advantage of, but unfortunately, sometimes that happens. A hard lesson for me.

Thanks again for your encouraging words and support!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Thank you so much for sharing now I'm curious to read more. I think you have a 100% pure fantasy book with all the supernatural elements and true love. Good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you, Iza :)

Glad you enjoyed. I do love creating new adventures for my Breedline. Although I have one more chapter to go, and happy to reveal my book cover, this is not the end to the story. I still happy to continue to write the next book.

Thanks for reading and for the inspiring words.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Are you close to the end of the book chapters? I don't mean anything other than your well-written chapter with your characters fitting their parts and dialogue well had a feel of completion.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you, Shirley :)

I do have one more chapter that will add an additional smile to the story. Sometimes I like to take the reader months ahead to tell more. I love a story that sums up each character which leads to the next book to come. I hope you stop in to read. I am also excited to showcase my book cover. My artist is so amazing at her craft.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Scongrove, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I hadn't read any of these before so I enjoyed that you put a large synapsis at the beginning. You have a really good story going on there. :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you, susand3022 :)

Glad you enjoyed this chapter. I do love to create new adventures for my Breedline. This will be book five in the series. Hopefully it will be out mid-March. It's definitely been fun sharing it here. I love to hear everyone's feedback. It's very helpful.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)