Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Raindrops Crescendo"Musings of an old man -2020
28 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
A very nice Kyrielle for the challenge. The rhythm and rhymes worked well. And I could hear the steady patter of raindrops against the window. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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A very nice Kyrielle for the challenge. The rhythm and rhymes worked well. And I could hear the steady patter of raindrops against the window. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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June, I do thank you for your validation.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello JLR!
I so appreciate the sentiments shared in your well-crafted Kyrielle - one of my favorite poetic forms. Yours paints a picture to which I can well relate! And as I write, not rain but a doozy of a winter storm has descended upon us... again!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Hello JLR!
I so appreciate the sentiments shared in your well-crafted Kyrielle - one of my favorite poetic forms. Yours paints a picture to which I can well relate! And as I write, not rain but a doozy of a winter storm has descended upon us... again!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Diane, thank you. I also find the Kyrielle poetic style much to my liking, be safe as the snow builds a foot hold.
Comment from Susan Larson
Your Kyrielle poem is beautiful with a beautiful refrain. The tapping and cleansing of the raindrops and the hope for sun's rays dancing, appealing to the senses. I can just see, hear, feel and even smell this "crescendo off the pane." The bird looks like he shares your feelings.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Your Kyrielle poem is beautiful with a beautiful refrain. The tapping and cleansing of the raindrops and the hope for sun's rays dancing, appealing to the senses. I can just see, hear, feel and even smell this "crescendo off the pane." The bird looks like he shares your feelings.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Susan, thank you for your supportive comments.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
A fun kyrielle! I love the sound and look and feel of a gentle rain, but my bones don't! You capture the emotions well with your poem. Thanks for sharing. "Crescendo" is a great verb to describe the cumulative effect of rain, rain, rain.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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A fun kyrielle! I love the sound and look and feel of a gentle rain, but my bones don't! You capture the emotions well with your poem. Thanks for sharing. "Crescendo" is a great verb to describe the cumulative effect of rain, rain, rain.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Darlene, thank you so very much for the kind review and connection to the rhythm of rain.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, this is a lovely Kyrielle written true to form. The repeated line fits seamlessly into place without sounding forced. The subject is attractive and a good read. Good picture to accompany and the whole is very well done. Good Potlatch entry. Good Luck - Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Hello JLR, this is a lovely Kyrielle written true to form. The repeated line fits seamlessly into place without sounding forced. The subject is attractive and a good read. Good picture to accompany and the whole is very well done. Good Potlatch entry. Good Luck - Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Dorothy, thank you, I appreciate the validation on the repeated line.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well written poem about the coming of spring. This is a lovely kyrielle with nice sets of rhymes. Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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This is a well written poem about the coming of spring. This is a lovely kyrielle with nice sets of rhymes. Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your positive validation.
Comment from MissMerri
I truly enjoyed this Kyrielle. I too love the rain, though sometimes too many rainy days in a row can be depressing. The rhyme pattern was interesting and pleasant. The repeating line fit nicely into its position at the close of each stanza, never appearing forced or out of place. I think this is a dandy poem. I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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I truly enjoyed this Kyrielle. I too love the rain, though sometimes too many rainy days in a row can be depressing. The rhyme pattern was interesting and pleasant. The repeating line fit nicely into its position at the close of each stanza, never appearing forced or out of place. I think this is a dandy poem. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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MissMerri, thank you for your kind review and comments.
Comment from Gail Denham
The dripping bird is quite a theme. Today in our church meeting, the lesson talked about how God cares for the tiny sparrow, and He'll take care of us. I picture a chicken covering her chicks with her wings.
Good poem, vivid images.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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The dripping bird is quite a theme. Today in our church meeting, the lesson talked about how God cares for the tiny sparrow, and He'll take care of us. I picture a chicken covering her chicks with her wings.
Good poem, vivid images.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Gail, thank you very much. I always enjoy nature and God's visual of his magnificent artistry in things.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your challenge poem for Potlatch. Your words create good imagery. The repeated line fits in nicely in all verse. Your picture choice is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed your challenge poem for Potlatch. Your words create good imagery. The repeated line fits in nicely in all verse. Your picture choice is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Jan, I always appreciate you comments and validation.
Comment from Bichon
The description in this poem is amazing. I felt like I was seeing everything through your words and witnessing it all. From the gentle rain to the little wren, I felt present through it all.
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The description in this poem is amazing. I felt like I was seeing everything through your words and witnessing it all. From the gentle rain to the little wren, I felt present through it all.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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I am himbled by your gracious six-star review.
