I /We / One
Joining Nonets25 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the powerful message conveyed in this. It is something that needs to be practiced by all mankind aggressively. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done my friend!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I love the powerful message conveyed in this. It is something that needs to be practiced by all mankind aggressively. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done my friend!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you Jeffrey, for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your reflections about the value of neighbors and your joining nonet format. Your concluding line is quite powerful and the artwork is reinforcing. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I admired your reflections about the value of neighbors and your joining nonet format. Your concluding line is quite powerful and the artwork is reinforcing. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your great review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Susan Larson
A beautiful pairing of nonets, I to we, then concluding we to one. I love the way you so subtly transition from past tense to future tense, becoming more and more positive as your words flow along.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A beautiful pairing of nonets, I to we, then concluding we to one. I love the way you so subtly transition from past tense to future tense, becoming more and more positive as your words flow along.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your very inspiring review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. I love how you did this in joining Nonets and with your color choices and photo it makes a lovely presentation. This piece sends a strong message. Well done! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hello there, my friend. I love how you did this in joining Nonets and with your color choices and photo it makes a lovely presentation. This piece sends a strong message. Well done! ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very inspirational double-Nonet that lays out a great plan for the future.
"we plant seeds for the future
we will strive to unite mankind
we shall change, I to we, we to one" Let's hope we can.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A very inspirational double-Nonet that lays out a great plan for the future.
"we plant seeds for the future
we will strive to unite mankind
we shall change, I to we, we to one" Let's hope we can.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you and yes let's hope we can, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love nonets, they can be used so many different ways. This double nonet is excellenty done and the message of I to we is totally clear. Very well stated
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I love nonets, they can be used so many different ways. This double nonet is excellenty done and the message of I to we is totally clear. Very well stated
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you, and yes the nonet is a wonderful form, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
You are right, it would be nice if all people would be kinder to each other and realize we are all one.
Good job with the nonets.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
You are right, it would be nice if all people would be kinder to each other and realize we are all one.
Good job with the nonets.
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you, and yes a little kindness would be great, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from playinaround
A perfect poem for this time in history. The shape is perfect. I love the breakdown and the build up. a fast moving and well written poem. Love it. congratulations!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A perfect poem for this time in history. The shape is perfect. I love the breakdown and the build up. a fast moving and well written poem. Love it. congratulations!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank so very much for your wonderful review, comments, and the great stars, all are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your double nonet is in good form syllable wise per line. I enjoyed reading it. I like how the first one expresses your thoughts, but the second changes POV as we are all in this together. Thanks for sharing. You give readers much to think about. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Your double nonet is in good form syllable wise per line. I enjoyed reading it. I like how the first one expresses your thoughts, but the second changes POV as we are all in this together. Thanks for sharing. You give readers much to think about. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Jan, I had fun working on this one, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from bob cullen
The message is superb. The shape demands attention. On the first read you scan over the words, on the second read you absorb them. Reflection then brings the realisation of the absolute truth in this poem and the need for ACTION to be UNDERTAKEN.
Excellent work KAHPOT. I just read your name backwards and you are indeed a TOPHAK. I believe hack was an old term for a writer.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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The message is superb. The shape demands attention. On the first read you scan over the words, on the second read you absorb them. Reflection then brings the realisation of the absolute truth in this poem and the need for ACTION to be UNDERTAKEN.
Excellent work KAHPOT. I just read your name backwards and you are indeed a TOPHAK. I believe hack was an old term for a writer.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your wonderful and positive comments, and I like what you made of my name-very clever****kahpot
