Sailing
I'm sailing for an island2 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Michael,
I love the ambiance of your well-crafted poetic offering as well as the sentiments expressed.
I read your poem aloud, and it flows very well.
If I may, I would suggest switching the last two stanzas as "future" is a larger concept than "island."
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Hello Michael,
I love the ambiance of your well-crafted poetic offering as well as the sentiments expressed.
I read your poem aloud, and it flows very well.
If I may, I would suggest switching the last two stanzas as "future" is a larger concept than "island."
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Hello Diane. Thank you for your thoughtful appreciation of this poem. I quite often complete a poem and realise that the order of the verses might work better altered and I even thought about this one briefly and did have a niggle that my ending wasn't the strongest. I will certainly keep your suggestion in mind.
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My pleasure!
diane
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well wishful poem you have penned about sailing to an island. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the picture you used. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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This is a very well wishful poem you have penned about sailing to an island. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the picture you used. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your very kind and thoughtful appreciation of this poem Teri. My warmest wishes to you as ever. Michael
