Midlife intervention
God intervenes without an invitation15 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an extremely interesting story, where the main character slowly comes to terms with who she is and her place in the world. It is written in a down to earth fashion (I loved the line "[they] told me it would be fun. They lied. It wasn't.") and it is sucks you into the story very easily. I can imagine clearly the end of the day when her husband comes home, and beyond that point). Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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This is an extremely interesting story, where the main character slowly comes to terms with who she is and her place in the world. It is written in a down to earth fashion (I loved the line "[they] told me it would be fun. They lied. It wasn't.") and it is sucks you into the story very easily. I can imagine clearly the end of the day when her husband comes home, and beyond that point). Well done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much! Gretchen
Comment from Drew Delaney
It was good to read this as we all seem to be so hard on ourselves somehow. Putting the bottle of wine down the drain is commendable. We don't need it. I liked this very much. You are special!
Drew
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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It was good to read this as we all seem to be so hard on ourselves somehow. Putting the bottle of wine down the drain is commendable. We don't need it. I liked this very much. You are special!
Drew
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much! Gretchen
Comment from GE Parson
Hi GW Hargiss, I seldom give 6 ratings but your poem
moved my spiritual faith bone. I am a retired Pastor and really appreciate personnal testimony of God moving into an ol' sinners life and making them brand new from the inside out. Bible says "If any one be in Christ, they are new creation; old things have passed away and all things are become new."
God bless you; "Always go with God and His Word and you can never go wrong"
Rev. Howarth
AKA G.E.Parson
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Hi GW Hargiss, I seldom give 6 ratings but your poem
moved my spiritual faith bone. I am a retired Pastor and really appreciate personnal testimony of God moving into an ol' sinners life and making them brand new from the inside out. Bible says "If any one be in Christ, they are new creation; old things have passed away and all things are become new."
God bless you; "Always go with God and His Word and you can never go wrong"
Rev. Howarth
AKA G.E.Parson
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much! Gretchen
Comment from Cindy Warren
Maybe her husband wasn't as disinterested as she thought. I don't know if God exists or not. I do know that drinking and feeling sorry for yourself is not very attractive. Nothing wrong with telling it like it is, tho. 50 should be fifty.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Maybe her husband wasn't as disinterested as she thought. I don't know if God exists or not. I do know that drinking and feeling sorry for yourself is not very attractive. Nothing wrong with telling it like it is, tho. 50 should be fifty.
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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I agree. Self pity is a waste. Thank you for your great review. Gretchen
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is an awesome offering -- relatable and real!! If I had a sixer, it would certainly be yours for you say so much that others can definitely feel... Thanx for sharing! ;)
Sincerely,
still waiting on the whisper :)
curse, and tell it --> curse, and I tell it OR curse and tell it
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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This is an awesome offering -- relatable and real!! If I had a sixer, it would certainly be yours for you say so much that others can definitely feel... Thanx for sharing! ;)
Sincerely,
still waiting on the whisper :)
curse, and tell it --> curse, and I tell it OR curse and tell it
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much. I will correct those spats. Have a great night. Gretchen
