Red Rock High
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Comment from Ricky1024
Hi Brett.
I enjoyed the story your character descriptions with their names and their beliefs and values were incredible!
The fact that it's set in the High School theme brings more gravy to the plate for the reviewer!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Hi Brett.
I enjoyed the story your character descriptions with their names and their beliefs and values were incredible!
The fact that it's set in the High School theme brings more gravy to the plate for the reviewer!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the sixer and the review.
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Morning awaits...
As the crowe cocks the Raven quotes "Nevermore"
Me and Poe!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- quite the character you've created there... will you be finishing the other first or will you be working on the two simultaneously? :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Wow -- quite the character you've created there... will you be finishing the other first or will you be working on the two simultaneously? :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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I am going to finish Cody's story, and should I need a short refreshing break, work on Red Rock High. Appreciate the catch and the review.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a well written piece. I see no errors. Clear writing about a sociopath. This mental illness is dangerous and holds no preference for belief systems. Regardless of the sufferer's POV he/she will feel justified in holding it to the detriment of those not holding his/her own viewpoint. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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This is a well written piece. I see no errors. Clear writing about a sociopath. This mental illness is dangerous and holds no preference for belief systems. Regardless of the sufferer's POV he/she will feel justified in holding it to the detriment of those not holding his/her own viewpoint. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Sankey
An interesting intro to a new story of yours. Full pf lots of vocabulary but I think the readers can cope with it all. No spags as far as I can tell. Check out my recent posts.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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An interesting intro to a new story of yours. Full pf lots of vocabulary but I think the readers can cope with it all. No spags as far as I can tell. Check out my recent posts.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Will check you out. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Fonda Little
Love the cliff hanger you used at the end! "With each passing day, Most Likely To Succeed grew more into a powder keg ready to explode." The name you gave him at the end just the simple fact that the guy seems like he has it altogether and is so successful and he's going to end up doing these things gives the story a great twist!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Love the cliff hanger you used at the end! "With each passing day, Most Likely To Succeed grew more into a powder keg ready to explode." The name you gave him at the end just the simple fact that the guy seems like he has it altogether and is so successful and he's going to end up doing these things gives the story a great twist!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from damommy
Very intriguing excerpt. I can a tragedy waiting to happen. This Arbuckle boy has some demons. He's a terrible bully and manipulator. You certainly have my attention.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Very intriguing excerpt. I can a tragedy waiting to happen. This Arbuckle boy has some demons. He's a terrible bully and manipulator. You certainly have my attention.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
A very good chapter, I enjoyed reading. Your characters remained active and appropriate all the way through the piece. The dialogue was right on. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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A very good chapter, I enjoyed reading. Your characters remained active and appropriate all the way through the piece. The dialogue was right on. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is nice writing. I'm intrigued with your character and I want to know more. I like that you've set this story in the New Orleans which is place I lived for nearly two decades. The fact that is has secrets in his past that has made him what he is like will keep the readers interested.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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This is nice writing. I'm intrigued with your character and I want to know more. I like that you've set this story in the New Orleans which is place I lived for nearly two decades. The fact that is has secrets in his past that has made him what he is like will keep the readers interested.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
