Loving Hearts
Tenderness8 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. I truly love this 5 line piece. The simplicity and expression of it is spot on, what makes this stand out the most, in my opinion, is: how each line can stand it's own, yet, they all blend well together making this a fine piece of poetry. Nicely done! Good luck!
~ kerry
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hello there, my friend. I truly love this 5 line piece. The simplicity and expression of it is spot on, what makes this stand out the most, in my opinion, is: how each line can stand it's own, yet, they all blend well together making this a fine piece of poetry. Nicely done! Good luck!
~ kerry
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Kerry, Knowing that every line of my poem touched you in some way made my heart smile! I truly feel honored to have received such a lovely review! Thank you so much! :o) Helvi
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My pleasure, my friend.
Comment from Teri7
What a lovely 5 line poem you have penned about loving hearts. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Glad to see you back on here with us. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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What a lovely 5 line poem you have penned about loving hearts. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Glad to see you back on here with us. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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I think I know you! Is this the same Teri I knew in the past.? If so it's wonderful to hear from you and know you loved my poem! IF not..Thank you so much for the lovely review and wishes for the contest! :o) Helvi
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5 Line poem contest.
This short verse tells of loving hearts very nicely.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5 Line poem contest.
This short verse tells of loving hearts very nicely.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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HI Sharon, I'm thrilled you like my entry for the 5 line poetry contest! Thank you so much for reviewing! :o) Helvi
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Absolutely wonderful, the words tender, engaging. Love expressed such that the recipient of that love will "thrive" and feel the warmth and joy of being loved. Your art choice is just as lovely as your poem.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Absolutely wonderful, the words tender, engaging. Love expressed such that the recipient of that love will "thrive" and feel the warmth and joy of being loved. Your art choice is just as lovely as your poem.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Marylou, Love the words...Absolutely wonderful! I couldn't think of a better way to express love than the words I chose.! I'm glad they touched your heart. When it came for an image that would match my thoughts, I felt extremely lucky to find what I felt was the perfect image. Thank you so much for the wonderful review. :o) Helvi
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the five line poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have beautifully described feelings of love through your verse. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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This is a great entry for the five line poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have beautifully described feelings of love through your verse. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Heather, Thank you for the lovely review on my five Line Poetry entry. I'm glad you enjoyed! :o) Helvi
Comment from Ricky1024
"Loving Hearts"
Is a Five Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
And good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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"Loving Hearts"
Is a Five Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
And good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Hi Ricky, I wanted this poem to touch the heart! With just the first two lines written the rest of the poem came easily. I wanted to say a lot with the words I wrote. Thank you for the more than lovely review it means a lot! :o) Helvi
Comment from Mia Twysted
The way love should be, full and true. That kind of love that can move mountains. I wish there was more of this in the world today.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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The way love should be, full and true. That kind of love that can move mountains. I wish there was more of this in the world today.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Hi Mia, You're right about love being such a special gift. A hug or loving expression means so much! Thank you for the lovely review and wishes for the contest! :o) Helvi
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This poem truly radiates the tenderness it describes. This is also a vivid description of love between people that is uplifting, nurturing and encouraging. The colors and the image add to the impression of love expressed. The picture suggests love between a mother and child, but it could be a deep love between any two people or within a family. Very well done, and I don't think you're rusty!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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This poem truly radiates the tenderness it describes. This is also a vivid description of love between people that is uplifting, nurturing and encouraging. The colors and the image add to the impression of love expressed. The picture suggests love between a mother and child, but it could be a deep love between any two people or within a family. Very well done, and I don't think you're rusty!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Hi Mary, Thank you for the lovely review! I wanted this poem to reflect the vastness of love between anyone. Thank you for letting me know I got that feeling across. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem and don't think I've gotten rusty with my poetry. Blessings! :o) Helvi
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You're very welcome, Helvi. I'm happy that I could be reassuring :-) xoxo
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Your review made me smile and that is a wonderful gift to pass on! Thank you! :o) Helvi
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xoxo
