Gimme Twenty
father and son fun5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun offering for this unique contest!! ;) A great relationship on display with bit of back and forth banter to be had... it is a thing with sons and dads!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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What a fun offering for this unique contest!! ;) A great relationship on display with bit of back and forth banter to be had... it is a thing with sons and dads!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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many thanks for your kind comments and good wishes.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup give me twenty - twenty bucks, that was my first guess, but the kid was clever than me:) Twenty years? Nope 2020 equals 365 days. I like this game with the kids is witty and naughty in the same time and I think is a good entry for the dialogue contest. Good luck with your writings and with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Yup give me twenty - twenty bucks, that was my first guess, but the kid was clever than me:) Twenty years? Nope 2020 equals 365 days. I like this game with the kids is witty and naughty in the same time and I think is a good entry for the dialogue contest. Good luck with your writings and with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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thank you. your comments are much appreciated. And thanks for the good luck.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your dialogue, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your dialogue, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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many thanks!
Comment from May 1
This is such a fun dialogue to read. I love how real it feels and the fact that it is funny and yet deep at the same time. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this dialogue.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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This is such a fun dialogue to read. I love how real it feels and the fact that it is funny and yet deep at the same time. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this dialogue.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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you are mighty nice. many thanks.
Comment from LisaMay
You may have called this 'just a bit of silliness' but it is the sort of silliness i like - well written, humorous, engaging, with wordplay. 'Weep Year' is clever, and I liked how the dialogue carried life philosophies about aging from both viewpoints.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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You may have called this 'just a bit of silliness' but it is the sort of silliness i like - well written, humorous, engaging, with wordplay. 'Weep Year' is clever, and I liked how the dialogue carried life philosophies about aging from both viewpoints.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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I like silly, too, as you can see.
Many thanks for your really nice review.
