Starlight
The starlight provided a certain glow.2 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Very beautiful picture which will surely get the attention of the voters. A nice simile with starlight in her hair being compared to a coronet. I wonder if you mean innocence, as innocents would refer to people. judi
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Very beautiful picture which will surely get the attention of the voters. A nice simile with starlight in her hair being compared to a coronet. I wonder if you mean innocence, as innocents would refer to people. judi
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Your are correct. Thanks for the read and the catch.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent one line poem
with wonderful description and simile.
Perfect picture to match
I wonder if [innocents] or innocence is the word you want.
Best wishes ion the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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You've written an excellent one line poem
with wonderful description and simile.
Perfect picture to match
I wonder if [innocents] or innocence is the word you want.
Best wishes ion the contest
Robert
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Your are correct. Thanks for the read and the catch.
