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A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from Lulube
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A good article writing on this sorrowful day. I did not know any of this, so I do now and it sickens me. So many can cross the line with no conscious, whatsoever.
Good reporting.

lulube

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
    when I found out from one of my church member friends with the Latter Day Saints Church of Jesus Christ that this group was not LDS cuz they never would have been in Mexico.
    Doesn't make a difference it's sad children dying.
    Thanks,
    Ricky
reply by Lulube on 11-Feb-2020
    Death takes it's own ride to the end.

    lulube
Comment from Bicpen
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Excellent this piece is informative with sound jurisdiction with a dedicated voice and prescribed liberty it unveils the hidden truth between the complex nature of the human soul deliberating whether there really is an answer to the unfailing mystery of the origin of evil. It speaks volumes and clearly we must act by taking to sanctified beliefs and not weapons especially not of a mass destruction kind which could inflame and ignite such hatred and passions as to obliterate the whole of mankind ... message received and understood your prayer partner ... B. (its just a consonant not to hard to spell or even stutter)

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
    Hey B what more did you C?
    this was research.gov Google when I was trying to learn about a recent issue with my church Latter-Day Saint Church of Jesus Christ.
    When I talked about it last Sunday since they were in Mexico my friend Anthony told me they're not an affiliated LDS church put a spin-off probably the one that believes in polygamy in the president has multiple wives.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Bicpen on 03-Feb-2020
    Excellent ... just as I thought, why have one when you can have many ... the restraint of love is a bashful thing though it talks and yields for a better relationship ... however more death can only bring more pain and whether their associated with us or just fleeting names on a black box of electronics their loss will always be remembered by someone and their pain and suffering is duly noted ... however I do stand by what I said sanctified beliefs though in my own experience there have been many a time I would just love to have resorted to a flash of a guided missile to enforce these sanctified beliefs and the justice of them. The means of the killing is the despair of hate and anger which relates in murder which is disturbing especially when it is so unnatural such as in the beginning when we were all happy revolving around the tree of good and evil ... however since death came into the world we will always have a stark reminder of it somewhere in our lives if not on our own doorsteps ... sometime weapons of mass destruction can be used for a means to an end take Hiroshima it ended the war ... in a sense no more death ... however evil is always present whether in a reviewer or even an old lady cuddling a dog and crossing the street with her bag of stolen messages ... it really is a mystery in its origin but one thing is certain it will always remain.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This lacks the emotional pull of your story that is nominated this month for Story of the Month (congrats!). But it has your personal touch which always works. I would recommend instead of giving us the facts imagine you are one of the survivors and show us what happened through that persons eyes and thoughts. But overall well done.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
    These are all good suggestions.
    I wasn't really going after the emotional aspect of it as much as the being the fact that was so traumatic.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I did not hear about this but it seems to go with the prophesys that are happening in this day and age. Hatred seems to be all consuming. Nicely done...

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
    I was talking to LDS friend today at church he said that that wasn't those people weren't from our LDS church something to do with the fact he never would have been in Mexico.
    And they were an affiliate of the church and the church president believes in polygamy which our church does not.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024