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Comment from kahpot
Well Dr. Ricky, I think this is one of your best works I have read, your improvement on describing a moment and or moments is excellent, your heartfelt relief for the people in that house and the emptiness of the truck are honorable, I think like the tornado your writing has moved ahead at enormous Knots, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Well Dr. Ricky, I think this is one of your best works I have read, your improvement on describing a moment and or moments is excellent, your heartfelt relief for the people in that house and the emptiness of the truck are honorable, I think like the tornado your writing has moved ahead at enormous Knots, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Thanks kahpot.
More to come!
Ricky
Comment from Cindy Warren
It's a good thing there was nobody in that truck! They would have been squashed. Imagine four hours of being tossed about. You'd have nightmares for the rest of your life.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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It's a good thing there was nobody in that truck! They would have been squashed. Imagine four hours of being tossed about. You'd have nightmares for the rest of your life.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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If their real sizes was a very powerful Tornado F4.
If it was an F-5?
There wouldn't have been no survivors.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
This was a very exciting piece. Full of emotion and action. It was also a story full of terror. I thought that you captured the reader's interest and kept him on the edge of their seats.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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This was a very exciting piece. Full of emotion and action. It was also a story full of terror. I thought that you captured the reader's interest and kept him on the edge of their seats.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Truly, the only way you can survive something like that and not be disturbingly killed?
With 4 hours of insanity going on?
In your home?
Is to pray!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
I am impressed with your captivating description of a most harrowing incident, which a family of four went through, and came out virtually unscathed! One conclusion comes to mind: it was not their time to die. God's hand was upon them and therefore on their mobile home; also divine providence saw to it that the truck upon which they landed was unoccupied. This was an utterly amazing incident, and you have reported it very well, with respect and great flair. Great work, Ricky.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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I am impressed with your captivating description of a most harrowing incident, which a family of four went through, and came out virtually unscathed! One conclusion comes to mind: it was not their time to die. God's hand was upon them and therefore on their mobile home; also divine providence saw to it that the truck upon which they landed was unoccupied. This was an utterly amazing incident, and you have reported it very well, with respect and great flair. Great work, Ricky.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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I've heard of incident where when it comes to a tornado everybody in the house was killed in the baby was found safe and up in the branches of a tree!
this mimics is in the woman did pray I guess most people would when they seen that situation.
I don't want this is true but I heard when they found cool b Bryant's body he had his arms in an embrace around his daughter?
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Those are also amazing things -- a baby found safely in a tree! And yes, I can surely believe that Kobe Bryant had his arms around his daughter. I hadn't heard about that, but if they had an idea about their impending fate, even for 10 seconds, most of us would hold onto our loved ones in those final moments. It was probably also a protective embrace. God rest their souls.
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start to slow down that's it that is precious but somebody posted that there was 30 Marines in a sailor involved in the military crash and not one word said about it and it happened on the same day!
Ricky
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That should have absolutely been covered. Our men and women in uniform deserve honor and recognition, especially when they lay down their lives. May God carry them home.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow very well told. Excellent and shows the aggressive power of mother nature and her unforgiving and yet compassionate ways. Very nicely done......
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Oh wow very well told. Excellent and shows the aggressive power of mother nature and her unforgiving and yet compassionate ways. Very nicely done......
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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yes I just said I was talking to my daughter about this on Facebook amazing they could live through that but I guarantee if it was an F5 there's no way they would be thrown around so violently in that house for 4 hours is in if they survive they be brain dead!
Thanks again!
Ricky
