With Sympathy
Twenty Words of Sympathy9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done with a short rhyming poem. I especially liked that you assured the bereaved that their loved one will never be forgotten. That is very consoling.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Nicely done with a short rhyming poem. I especially liked that you assured the bereaved that their loved one will never be forgotten. That is very consoling.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Dear lyenochka, Thank you for your comments, compliments, and review. Thanks also for your best wishes. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Words of sympathy for a funeral and I sincerely hope it is not someone close to you. Fine words for the grief filled relatives, we never forget our loved ones, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Words of sympathy for a funeral and I sincerely hope it is not someone close to you. Fine words for the grief filled relatives, we never forget our loved ones, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. No, it is not, thank God, anyone close to me - it was just words that I thought would be good for the contest. Love, Donna
Comment from Bill Pinder
You did a great job expressing sympathy in 20 words in this poem. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way. Keep On writing and expressing concern for others.
on right team and expressing concern for others. Bill
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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You did a great job expressing sympathy in 20 words in this poem. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way. Keep On writing and expressing concern for others.
on right team and expressing concern for others. Bill
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Dear Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a short and simple poem which meets the sympathy contest requirements. The picture is very well chosen and highlights the words very well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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This is a short and simple poem which meets the sympathy contest requirements. The picture is very well chosen and highlights the words very well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Dear Susan, Thank you for your review and comments and compliments. Dove
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Donna, I found that when I read your poem I liked staring with the second line and ending it with the first.. then after a second read I started with the third and fourth lines and ended with the first and second line. Your poem has ways of expressing itself in subtle ways by just rearranging the lines. The message however, still lets the reader know that the writer feels the pain of the loss. Nicely written with various ways to express the thoughts. Hope you're taking care of yourself! Good Luck in the Contest!:o) Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Hi Donna, I found that when I read your poem I liked staring with the second line and ending it with the first.. then after a second read I started with the third and fourth lines and ended with the first and second line. Your poem has ways of expressing itself in subtle ways by just rearranging the lines. The message however, still lets the reader know that the writer feels the pain of the loss. Nicely written with various ways to express the thoughts. Hope you're taking care of yourself! Good Luck in the Contest!:o) Nancy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Hi, Nancy, Thank you for your comments and review. And for your good luck wishes. Donna
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a precious entry and a perfect verse for this prompt, Dove... I like how you presented it on a somber, black background.. very appropriate. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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This is a precious entry and a perfect verse for this prompt, Dove... I like how you presented it on a somber, black background.. very appropriate. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Dear Melissa, Thank you for your review, compliments, and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Ricky1024
"With Sympathy"
Is a Twenty Words of Sympathy contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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"With Sympathy"
Is a Twenty Words of Sympathy contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Dear Ricky, Thank you for your review, comments, compliments, and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! A lovely and delightful sentiment. Memories are compassionate pictures of your life.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! A lovely and delightful sentiment. Memories are compassionate pictures of your life.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Dear Rebekka, Thank you for your review, compliments, and good luck wishes. A Big Hug and blessings to you too! Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written post you have penned for the Twenty Words of Sympathy contest. You used great heartfelt words and lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Donna, This is a very well written post you have penned for the Twenty Words of Sympathy contest. You used great heartfelt words and lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your review, compliments, and best wishes. Love you. Donna
