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Be Strong Young Man

Something I wrote for my cousin.

4 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Justin. Your poem to your cousin whose dad passed is a kind and thoughtful way to express empathy/sympathy for him. God is there through it all. Grieving, I find, comes and goes and it takes a long time to dissipate. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    Thank you Marilyn.
Comment from May 1
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I am so impressed that you would write such a beautiful poem to help someone deal with their sorrow. It is very well-written and I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much May.
Comment from lance michaels
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Wow, such a powerful and truthful poem. I hope your cousin reads this and finds solace in your inspiring words. Death of a loved one is hard to deal with. May your cousin and yourself find peace.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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I really enjoyed this poem that is well written with the power to encourage your cousin after losing his dad. I appreciate this expression of faith in God and compassion for your cousin. In the last stanza did you mean to say go forth and "live your life?"
Bill

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you.