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Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The Ol' Stone Well - Chapter 21"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from Lu Saluna
There is a lot going on in this chapter. The dream had me going for a while. Then all of a sudden we are in Vietnam with Bill and his special forces team. But them we get left hanging with Grandma in the well. I hope she gets out okay, I like her character. A very action packed chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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There is a lot going on in this chapter. The dream had me going for a while. Then all of a sudden we are in Vietnam with Bill and his special forces team. But them we get left hanging with Grandma in the well. I hope she gets out okay, I like her character. A very action packed chapter.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Lu! Sorry for the delay! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, as we've said before, your continued support means so much to us! Thank you! Glad you like Grandma, too. :) Chapter 22 has been published, and Chapter 23 has been written and will also be posted soon. Have a wonderful weekend! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Goodness, I hope Cathy gets help and rescues grandma from the well. It could have lots of things in that well that might be frightening too. I remember the days when we had a cistern ourselves.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Goodness, I hope Cathy gets help and rescues grandma from the well. It could have lots of things in that well that might be frightening too. I remember the days when we had a cistern ourselves.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Rosemary! Sorry for the delay. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this Chapter. As we've mentioned before, your continued support means so much to us! Chapter 22 is now posted, and Chapter 23 has been written and will be posted soon. Have a wonderful weekend! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Well Tootie. You started this chapter with a tragedy--turned dream, and now you build enough suspense in the dialogue to bring us to another crisis in the same chapter.
You fooled me in the beginning and left me in suspense at the end. A lot of action in this chapter. Very interesting.
STILL READING
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Well Tootie. You started this chapter with a tragedy--turned dream, and now you build enough suspense in the dialogue to bring us to another crisis in the same chapter.
You fooled me in the beginning and left me in suspense at the end. A lot of action in this chapter. Very interesting.
STILL READING
Robert
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hi Robert! Sorry for the delay! Thank you so much for continuing to follow along. Glad we left you in suspense and kept your interest. We know you have read our next chapter to. God Bless You! Chapter 23 has also been written and will be coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
How on Earth did Grandma fall into a well? That one surprises me a little too much. I grew up watching General Hospital. It was a good show and still is, although I rarely watch it. I keep up with it standing in the grocery line reading the headlines of the magazines for sale. LOL This is another good installment.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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How on Earth did Grandma fall into a well? That one surprises me a little too much. I grew up watching General Hospital. It was a good show and still is, although I rarely watch it. I keep up with it standing in the grocery line reading the headlines of the magazines for sale. LOL This is another good installment.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hi Barbara! Sorry for the delay. I'm sure by now you know why Grandma fell in the well. Darn Grandpa! LOL Glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing it. As you know, Chapter 22 has now been posted, and Chapter 23 has been written and will be posted soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Talk about excitement, Cathy! I think you should put a health warning at the top of your chapters, 'No one with heart problems or high blood pressure can read this!' LOL! Goodness me, you do find the best part to end your chapters. I was worried about Bill in the beginning, and you, I thought, when did Bill and Cathy die?? Thankfully he was dreaming it in his concussed state. Well, you two, you'd best be almost ready to post the next part, you can't leave Grandma hanging up to her neck in water down in the well!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Talk about excitement, Cathy! I think you should put a health warning at the top of your chapters, 'No one with heart problems or high blood pressure can read this!' LOL! Goodness me, you do find the best part to end your chapters. I was worried about Bill in the beginning, and you, I thought, when did Bill and Cathy die?? Thankfully he was dreaming it in his concussed state. Well, you two, you'd best be almost ready to post the next part, you can't leave Grandma hanging up to her neck in water down in the well!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hi Sandra! So true about the health warning idea. LOL! Thank you again for following along. We really appreciate you reading and reviewing each chapter. As you know by now, Chapter 22 has been posted, and Chapter 23 has been written and will be posted soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Gideon300
I liked your dialogue. Very engaging. Your imagery is vivid and easy to conjure. I like that a lot about a story. I've haven't read your previous chapters so I don't have enough background on your story to comment on plot yet but it definitely seems like you know your way around a story.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I liked your dialogue. Very engaging. Your imagery is vivid and easy to conjure. I like that a lot about a story. I've haven't read your previous chapters so I don't have enough background on your story to comment on plot yet but it definitely seems like you know your way around a story.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Greetings! We are thrilled that you stopped by to read and review this chapter. Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it! We do encourage you to read the back chapters when you have time. Also, Chapter 22 has since been posted and is featured now, and Chapter 23 is right around the bend. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I got caught up in the General Hospital and Lipton tea. I grew up in Texas and these were familiar to me. Nice touch including things in everyday life that are familiar. I don't remember ever reading about grandmas demise so I'm hoping it isn't cause she fell into the well. This is a great angle of this captivating story line. As always wishing you two nothing but luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I got caught up in the General Hospital and Lipton tea. I grew up in Texas and these were familiar to me. Nice touch including things in everyday life that are familiar. I don't remember ever reading about grandmas demise so I'm hoping it isn't cause she fell into the well. This is a great angle of this captivating story line. As always wishing you two nothing but luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hi Kiwi! Sorry for the delay. Thanks for stopping by to read and review this. So glad you enjoyed it. Also, thank you for wishing us both luck. All is well, and we are thoroughly enjoying co-authoring four books together. We go from one cliff hanger to another! LOL Chapter 22 has since been posted, and Chapter 23 has been written and will be coming soon. Wishing you all the best. Have a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Cathy & Bill,
Nice piece in continuation having smooth and captivating flow, especially in the beginning and towards the end.
The scene of 'Grandma in the well', and in 3rd Paragraph"...Speak not of yesterday's hurt and sorrow; speak only of my promise for tomorrow." are noteworthy.
Entertaining as well as Educative!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hello Cathy & Bill,
Nice piece in continuation having smooth and captivating flow, especially in the beginning and towards the end.
The scene of 'Grandma in the well', and in 3rd Paragraph"...Speak not of yesterday's hurt and sorrow; speak only of my promise for tomorrow." are noteworthy.
Entertaining as well as Educative!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Greetings, our friend! Love how you say this chapter is "Entertaining as well as Educative!" That's exactly what we want so your comment meant so much--HURRAH! As we've said before, we really appreciate your continued support. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Chapter 22 has since been posted, and Chapter 23 is written and will be coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Bill & Cathy, Most Welcome!
With best wishes.
~ RP
Comment from Shirley McLain
You certainly left me hanging over the cliff. Are they going to save Grandma or is she drowning in the well? You did a great job and I'm ready to read more. Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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You certainly left me hanging over the cliff. Are they going to save Grandma or is she drowning in the well? You did a great job and I'm ready to read more. Shirley
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hi Shirley! Please forgive the delay. It's been busy and, as you can see, we've also been writing. There is not enough time in the day! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. Also, as we've said before, thank you for your continuing support. It means so much to us! I do believe you've read Chapter 22 also, which has just been posted. The next chapter is almost ready to post as well. We're movin' right along! Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ulla
Oh Dear, so Grandma has fallen into the well. That is no good, at all. I'm still following along to see where this is all going. i bet you both have great fun writing this. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Oh Dear, so Grandma has fallen into the well. That is no good, at all. I'm still following along to see where this is all going. i bet you both have great fun writing this. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hi Ulla! So sorry for the delay - it's been busy, and we've been writing away! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. Your support means a lot to us! Yes, she's fell in the well. Poor Grandma! As you know, writing is intense, but we are having fun! Chapter 22 has been written and will be posted very soon, so stay tuned. Wishing you the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
