Consumption
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "I Spat on Your Grave! (End)"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Bicpen
Classic stuff it was beautiful worthy of a top spot just bring the morbid ideas along with it and play it again Sam ... it reminisces of an encapsulated teenager desire liberation from teenage angst it screams in the face of authority and denies the superlative answer to reason we must deliberate and question the intensity and purpose used to great effect.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Classic stuff it was beautiful worthy of a top spot just bring the morbid ideas along with it and play it again Sam ... it reminisces of an encapsulated teenager desire liberation from teenage angst it screams in the face of authority and denies the superlative answer to reason we must deliberate and question the intensity and purpose used to great effect.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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When I was a child I didn't have the greatest upbringing that's why I experimented with death on insects.
I would never think of turning it into any kind of creature that was warm blooded and amphibians.
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one of my reviews thought that I was going to turn into a serial killing event but would have more chapters.
Mary is fictional but Nancy is non-fictional.
Thanks,
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Comment from Fonda Little
I like the color you used on for the background of this! Also the way you told the story in a sort of diary form was nice as well! It also does well in showing why he made the choices he did which I thought was great!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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I like the color you used on for the background of this! Also the way you told the story in a sort of diary form was nice as well! It also does well in showing why he made the choices he did which I thought was great!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the positive reply on this a couple people thought it was kind of nasty!
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Comment from Gail Denham
What a story - I thought he would turn into a serial killer. But just got revenge on someone. Rather distressing to think of his life and how he thought and acted.
well told.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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What a story - I thought he would turn into a serial killer. But just got revenge on someone. Rather distressing to think of his life and how he thought and acted.
well told.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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partners is based on reality in my wife of course the other parts fiction but I thought about turning them into the sea diving posted that but it would be more chapters more lengthy so I do want to do a Ted Bundy so I just killed off my ex-girlfriend!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
And he was never caught or helped? Did no one realize his problem? Where did the failure start? Wow what a person, it says mental begins with killing God's creatures
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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And he was never caught or helped? Did no one realize his problem? Where did the failure start? Wow what a person, it says mental begins with killing God's creatures
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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So true that played Little Ricky!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from susand3022
Ricky, remind me never to tell you where I live... this is seriously disturbing and totally creepy! Did you do it for the horror contest?... No? You really, really should have! It would have won hands down! LOL
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Ricky, remind me never to tell you where I live... this is seriously disturbing and totally creepy! Did you do it for the horror contest?... No? You really, really should have! It would have won hands down! LOL
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thanks Susan in the second chapter be released in a few hours around 7 Eastern standard Time
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, this truly a scary chapter in the life of a young man without compassion or thought for the pain of his victims.
But I think I can see the two roads that lay before him. The suspense of what happens to your protagonist and his reactions and choices because of those events is the greatest strength of this novella you are writing.
I am looking forward to your next chapter with eagerness!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Dear Author, this truly a scary chapter in the life of a young man without compassion or thought for the pain of his victims.
But I think I can see the two roads that lay before him. The suspense of what happens to your protagonist and his reactions and choices because of those events is the greatest strength of this novella you are writing.
I am looking forward to your next chapter with eagerness!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Text Susana chapter 2 in a few hours.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Thank you, I will acknowledge.
Comment from Edward Brink
Certainly hope the Ricky in the story isnt you haha!
I do really like the energy and word choice in this though. It seems to be bounce around which was fun to read. I'm usually not one for poetry but I enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Certainly hope the Ricky in the story isnt you haha!
I do really like the energy and word choice in this though. It seems to be bounce around which was fun to read. I'm usually not one for poetry but I enjoyed this!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thanks Edward as a child I never would hurt warm-blooded creatures let's just leave it at that!
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Comment from padumachitta
Hello
Well I would not want to meet or mess with this fellow.
The poem is surely graphic in its depiction of a troubled soul.
I imagine he's going on getup to worse things
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Hello
Well I would not want to meet or mess with this fellow.
The poem is surely graphic in its depiction of a troubled soul.
I imagine he's going on getup to worse things
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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thanks just think of Ted Bundy and Jeffrey Dahmer on steroids wanting to kill and you're going to then get a taste of what this is going to be and where it is going!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Oh crap!
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Wow! You've written this piece so beautifully and executed your thoughts and feelings in such a wonderful way. I enjoyed reading it and I'm taking the meanings with me that you conveyed. I hope you'll go far in this contest. Keep it up, wishing you luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Wow! You've written this piece so beautifully and executed your thoughts and feelings in such a wonderful way. I enjoyed reading it and I'm taking the meanings with me that you conveyed. I hope you'll go far in this contest. Keep it up, wishing you luck.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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The Ouija board has many many different meanings I was learning it makes for an interesting subject to Google.
Thanks,
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, so this one was almost impossible to get through... the part about the cat is just awful... although the insects and such was tough... :( :( Yvette
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Okay, so this one was almost impossible to get through... the part about the cat is just awful... although the insects and such was tough... :( :( Yvette
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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One of my reviewer said that they hope that little Ricky wasn't me and the beginning part is based on me my thoughts but I never would hurt a warm-blooded creature let's just go with that!
Ricky
