The appointment
She entered the conference room and my heart fluttered28 total reviews
Comment from Fonda Little
I really liked the picture you used! I also liked the words you chose to describe the attraction as well! Also that the story had a happy ending is always wonderful!
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I really liked the picture you used! I also liked the words you chose to describe the attraction as well! Also that the story had a happy ending is always wonderful!
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Thanks Fonda!
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is such a sweet and romantic poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it is a very good entry for the contest. You saw this girl and you were determined to get to know her.
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This is such a sweet and romantic poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it is a very good entry for the contest. You saw this girl and you were determined to get to know her.
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Barbara, thank you for your review and comments. I hope your weekend is filled with bountiful good times.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering for this contest.... I also met my husband at work.. ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck at the polls! ;)
Is there a chance? I thought, " I want to know this cutie." --> "A chance?" I thought, "Get to know this cutie!" [suggestion for 'flow'... feel free to ignore... ;)]
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A wonderful offering for this contest.... I also met my husband at work.. ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck at the polls! ;)
Is there a chance? I thought, " I want to know this cutie." --> "A chance?" I thought, "Get to know this cutie!" [suggestion for 'flow'... feel free to ignore... ;)]
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Yvette, yes, yes, yes! Thank you so much to guide me --i needed this to clean it up. I am always so appreciative!
Comment from rjuselius
Aaawww, this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love the story, I am sure your grandchildren can appreciate it done day.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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Aaawww, this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love the story, I am sure your grandchildren can appreciate it done day.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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Rebekka, I am so appreciative of your validation, may your weekend bring forth bountiful blessings and goodness, hugs circle you to!
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
I enjoyed the poem on how you met your valentine. The images are vivid and I liked the way you chose to begin the first stanza with the date of your meeting in the fist line and then followed each stanza after that by providing the time in the first line. It describes well how your interest in her grew as the time passed. I also liked your choice of words when creating the poetic scheme.
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I enjoyed the poem on how you met your valentine. The images are vivid and I liked the way you chose to begin the first stanza with the date of your meeting in the fist line and then followed each stanza after that by providing the time in the first line. It describes well how your interest in her grew as the time passed. I also liked your choice of words when creating the poetic scheme.
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Natalie, I am very appreciative of your validation an kind remarks,
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about how you met your Valentine. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written poem about how you met your Valentine. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Hi Teri, thank you! I hope that your weekend brings unexpected joys.
Comment from papa55mike
It's amazing how love works. It starts as a business meeting then blossoms. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It's amazing how love works. It starts as a business meeting then blossoms. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Hi Mike,, it us lucky men that got it right and know it. Have a super weekend!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, it had some nice rhymes. I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, it had some nice rhymes. I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Dear friend, it is so easy to write these poems with the subject that still after all these years sweeps my feet right out from under me. So, so fortunate, I am!~
