Consumption
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Ouija Board"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Carl DeVere
I'm always wondering where you are coming from and that makes you interesting. So I don't know how you meant this but I found it amusing. People want to fool around with the occult and sometimes get more than they bargained for. As it has been said, "Everything happens as intended."
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I'm always wondering where you are coming from and that makes you interesting. So I don't know how you meant this but I found it amusing. People want to fool around with the occult and sometimes get more than they bargained for. As it has been said, "Everything happens as intended."
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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One of my reviewer's said they hope it wasn't me and I said yes it is based on me is a kid I did never hurt warm-blooded creatures but I'm not going to stay when it comes to the insect while I wasn't entertained!
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Comment from royowen
An extremely interesting post Ricky. And I know all the subjects mentioned in this post. Not absolutely certain what it's about, but I know most of these really, they have been friends for quite a while my friend, well done, Ricky, blessings, Roy
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An extremely interesting post Ricky. And I know all the subjects mentioned in this post. Not absolutely certain what it's about, but I know most of these really, they have been friends for quite a while my friend, well done, Ricky, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thanks and I do kill off if you read it all the way ideas are gems are doing so when she gets a chance to look at it I wonder how she'll fee
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Doctor Ricky 1024
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Me too
Comment from padumachitta
Hello
Mmm, an interesting read. I was a bit confused and had to go over it in places. I am guessing these are people on this site??
Was it meant to be horror? I haven't read any other chapters, so maybe I am lost.
I gave it a 5 because it intrigued me, and had me going over it.
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Hello
Mmm, an interesting read. I was a bit confused and had to go over it in places. I am guessing these are people on this site??
Was it meant to be horror? I haven't read any other chapters, so maybe I am lost.
I gave it a 5 because it intrigued me, and had me going over it.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Yes all the characters are fan story writers and thanks for your time.
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Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Bravo! You've written this piece so beautifully and executed your thoughts in a witty way. I completely enjoyed reading it and tried to get the meanings that you conveyed. I hope you'll go miles in this contest. Keep it up and best of luck.
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Bravo! You've written this piece so beautifully and executed your thoughts in a witty way. I completely enjoyed reading it and tried to get the meanings that you conveyed. I hope you'll go miles in this contest. Keep it up and best of luck.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thanks I really appreciate your time and your wonderful review and thoughts!
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Guess it's a good thing I'm not looking then, right?! ;) :) A fun offering for the day, sir, delivering a much needed smile! :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and erase all the gnome graffiti that crept into the piece about mid-way through.... :)
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LOL!! Guess it's a good thing I'm not looking then, right?! ;) :) A fun offering for the day, sir, delivering a much needed smile! :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and erase all the gnome graffiti that crept into the piece about mid-way through.... :)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Come on I love my gnome graffiti!
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Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your post has been attacked by the gremlins here Ricky or maybe it is the supernatural power that you are dabbling in? Your story made me smile, love Dolly x
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Your post has been attacked by the gremlins here Ricky or maybe it is the supernatural power that you are dabbling in? Your story made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I think this is my fourth piece where I use the fanstorisns in it.
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Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The game spirit, challenge in writing, enjoying life in diverse activities, and consuming moments to creative skill, place to the writers and reviewers of this site, dare and devil go on, well said, well done; pl sponsor me a m'ship; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this.
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The game spirit, challenge in writing, enjoying life in diverse activities, and consuming moments to creative skill, place to the writers and reviewers of this site, dare and devil go on, well said, well done; pl sponsor me a m'ship; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thanks for revealing but I can't review any or work until it's made available to the public.
You only have worked at you want awards for and it's all been removed from public View.
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