Oh Life!
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Comment from Ladygreeneyes
Short and to the point! Great expression,
nice word usage. Nice flow, I haven't reviewed
that many tankas, but this one I really enjoyed!
Greet job!!
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Short and to the point! Great expression,
nice word usage. Nice flow, I haven't reviewed
that many tankas, but this one I really enjoyed!
Greet job!!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from terryangelo
I liked the almost primitive feel of your short but all-too-true verse. The saying "you can't please all the people all the time" found some competition in your work!
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I liked the almost primitive feel of your short but all-too-true verse. The saying "you can't please all the people all the time" found some competition in your work!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from Ponder
Hi Alcreator Writer,
As usual, your poem leaves the reader with a lot to think about. It is well laid out and formed, with interesting choices of language and phrases to make for an intriguing litttle poem.
Ponder
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Hi Alcreator Writer,
As usual, your poem leaves the reader with a lot to think about. It is well laid out and formed, with interesting choices of language and phrases to make for an intriguing litttle poem.
Ponder
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from suresh kumar
What a wonderful sweet little poem.
'If write simply, you jeer at
If hard or complex, point at '
Though this sounds funny, very meaningful and thought-provoking.
Thanks for sharing this poem.
.sursh kumar.,
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What a wonderful sweet little poem.
'If write simply, you jeer at
If hard or complex, point at '
Though this sounds funny, very meaningful and thought-provoking.
Thanks for sharing this poem.
.sursh kumar.,
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from Tallguy
An interesting little tanka. Its hard to say much in so few words but you managed it very well and you get your message across. Nicely written, I liked it
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An interesting little tanka. Its hard to say much in so few words but you managed it very well and you get your message across. Nicely written, I liked it
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from 3G Aum
feel the fate...lol. that's a bit ominous sounding. i cannot really judge on the quality of the poem based on the style of tanka because i have not read but a handful of them. simply as a poem, it's quite enjoyable. the way the lines are broken up, it has a nice balance of rhythm. and your message..well, is such a great one. ;)
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feel the fate...lol. that's a bit ominous sounding. i cannot really judge on the quality of the poem based on the style of tanka because i have not read but a handful of them. simply as a poem, it's quite enjoyable. the way the lines are broken up, it has a nice balance of rhythm. and your message..well, is such a great one. ;)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from Johnylew41
short and sweet but to the point
good flow and spacing
can be put into many situations in life
look forward to reading more of your poems
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short and sweet but to the point
good flow and spacing
can be put into many situations in life
look forward to reading more of your poems
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from eriq
well, you can't really satisfy all the people all the time. i think this is the main gist of the article.
it was a good tanka poem.
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well, you can't really satisfy all the people all the time. i think this is the main gist of the article.
it was a good tanka poem.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2006
Comment from neffi
I'm embarrassed to say this but I have never heard of a tanka before, but I found your poem quite interesting. I'm also not entirely sure I understand it, but on another level, it makes sense (and I'm sorry if this doesn't). Great poem :)
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I'm embarrassed to say this but I have never heard of a tanka before, but I found your poem quite interesting. I'm also not entirely sure I understand it, but on another level, it makes sense (and I'm sorry if this doesn't). Great poem :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2006
Comment from tuskantail
Tankas are certainly not my forte. I am a typical woman, I like to ramble so I am not really in a position to review your work. For a Tanka, I thought it very good, I even understood what you were trying to get across so in my books that's got to be worth a 5. I'm going to try to write one, one day.
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Tankas are certainly not my forte. I am a typical woman, I like to ramble so I am not really in a position to review your work. For a Tanka, I thought it very good, I even understood what you were trying to get across so in my books that's got to be worth a 5. I'm going to try to write one, one day.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2006
