A Book of ... Freeverse (Vol.2)
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dastardly Evil Behold !"Metre ... Freeverse
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Comment from BeasPeas
This is an interesting piece. I have to admit that I'm not completely sure what it's about, but I will say that competing five brains would be too much for me to handle. One is about all I can keep straight. Do like the image and word choices. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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This is an interesting piece. I have to admit that I'm not completely sure what it's about, but I will say that competing five brains would be too much for me to handle. One is about all I can keep straight. Do like the image and word choices. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Once you decipher the language its down to the meaning and this one is already been discovered as you can find if you look it up in the reviews I given my in depth disclosure about its knowledge.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bicpen
While I was trying to figure out your words, I was wishing that I had a brain to explain with brilliant words of my thoughts.
Gert
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Hello Bicpen
While I was trying to figure out your words, I was wishing that I had a brain to explain with brilliant words of my thoughts.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Well you can discover its meaning by the review page many thanks ...
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Hello Bicpen you are welcome and I will take a look of the reviews. Gert
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no worries makes for an interesting little read ...
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question if I find the answer, do you want-me to reply you.
Comment from royowen
I've often wondered what it would be like to have the brain of an Einstein, or an Isaac Newton, but I probably couldn't handle the neurones flying around in my head. Beautifully written my friend, this is an excellent free verse narrative, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I've often wondered what it would be like to have the brain of an Einstein, or an Isaac Newton, but I probably couldn't handle the neurones flying around in my head. Beautifully written my friend, this is an excellent free verse narrative, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you many thanks ...
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Well done
Comment from Ricky1024
Hmmm...
Intertwined and Interesting in a Spoctologically, Spoctologic, Logically Logical kind of way?
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery as it read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hmmm...
Intertwined and Interesting in a Spoctologically, Spoctologic, Logically Logical kind of way?
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery as it read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Excellent you really have got five brains ...
Comment from padumachitta
Hello
I needed to look a few things up, which is good.
This is a well written poem with a very serious theme. The language used is provocative and compelling
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hello
I needed to look a few things up, which is good.
This is a well written poem with a very serious theme. The language used is provocative and compelling
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Excellent much obliged ... glad you liked.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
This was a pretty nice and novel read. I see that it is part of your free verse book that you just started otherwise I would have recommended you enter this in a free verse contest! Best wishes for the coming chapters. Cheers
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This was a pretty nice and novel read. I see that it is part of your free verse book that you just started otherwise I would have recommended you enter this in a free verse contest! Best wishes for the coming chapters. Cheers
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you my friend I did check for some of the contests but maybe it was just me I could not see any for the free verse ... and I'm not to fond of waiting to long ... anyhoo no harm done the Mekon and his secret have been revealed and I enjoyed it, liberating as its my first poem ive written in a long long time ... maybe I shouldn't have but I kind of promised my self I would finish all my other work before venturing out to give myself a clear head again but I dont suppose it works like that not for me anyhow ... I promised that three years ago.
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
A great definition of Schizophrenia. I thought your post was striking original. You did a great job of describing someone who has a mental illness. It was an easy read with profound thoughts.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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A great definition of Schizophrenia. I thought your post was striking original. You did a great job of describing someone who has a mental illness. It was an easy read with profound thoughts.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you my friend glad you can appreciate ...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Evil lies are everywhere spoken by those who want to gain by them. Navigating our way is often strewn with treachery. I enjoyed the alliteration in the end rhymes, very clever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Evil lies are everywhere spoken by those who want to gain by them. Navigating our way is often strewn with treachery. I enjoyed the alliteration in the end rhymes, very clever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Thanks Dolly much appreciated much obliged.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Interesting choice of words to include "felicity" And "perpetual sanity." What do you mean by "you choose?" Another very interesting phrase, "wrath symbolic of Judas."
Bill
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Interesting choice of words to include "felicity" And "perpetual sanity." What do you mean by "you choose?" Another very interesting phrase, "wrath symbolic of Judas."
Bill
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Interesting is what I try to make it ... the idea that one can be perfectly happy (felicity) and in a state of ever progressing (perpetual) sanity in their own mind when it may very well be that by all other outward evidence a suggestion they are quite gloriously mad or even incurably insane is a fascinating concept.
They live and breath and being in an almost state of grace in their own minds carry out the most wicked acts known to men. The Mekon was an evil mastermind and genius who perfected even mind control if I remember rightly to purse a great world domination and planetary overrule. Like all forms of evil there has to be something somewhere in the human psyche or mind even the soul which transitions your thinking to become what you are ... an evil genius ... with this transition is choice and there you have the question of human responsibility.
The interesting phrase at the end, "wrath symbolic of Judas," means in a nutshell they have betrayed the human constitution of law of both god and man and are subsequently to be destined to a damned eternal existence. Irrespective of whether we believe in its existence life after death is a surety by which the fear of death itself is a testimony to the principle of an eternal existence, men may blot from their own minds this ingrained truth of human existence but it is part of the folly of their madness.
Testimony to fear is to acknowledge there is a death to come why else would we be afraid ... this is why in their felicity or happiness and perpetual or ongoing sanity they have no fear allowing for the capacity to strike evil into the heart of others when they themselves are really quite insane ... remember the Mekon was a dastardly evil overlord.
Now you choose ... ?
