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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Learning To Walk"
Writing for healing

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Comment from scongrove
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This deserved a ten ... sorry.
I love the artwork you added. It caught my eye.
I really liked how you talked about the shield of faith. I never thought of it that way, but I can see how having His faith can be like a shield to keep you safe. Every day is a struggle for most even if it doesn't show. We have to take one day at a time. I know you are courageous. If you weren't, you wouldn't be writing about your story. Keep them coming. I'd love to hear more.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Shana. I am so honored you wanted to give me more stars, it's ok. I'm glad you want to read more. Hope I'm not too boring, LOL.

    I'm always your fan ;))
    Rebeca
reply by scongrove on 01-Feb-2020
    I love to hear your story. Your never boring.

    Hugs,
    Shana :)
Comment from robyn corum
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Bec,

hahahaha Great choice of image. Much better than...say... choosing Dumbo, maybe. hahaha

What an inspiring piece. You are describing something that every Christian I know experiences. Regardless of their stage in life. We're all on that learning curve -- that arc. SOME of us take a little longer to grasp things (cough-cough). (finger pointing at myself, obviously.)

Never think you are alone in this journey. We are all weak and imperfect -- If you were perfect... you'd be Christ. And that's not gonna happen, my sister. Love ya, but... nope.

Thanks!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Bwahaha, you make me laugh! THANK YOU for your encouraging review. Blesses my heart~

    It's funny, the pieces I write, that I think are not strong, end up being strong with others. LOL This means so much. Thank you dear. :)
Comment from w.j.debi
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There are some strong statements of affirmation in your journal entry, and I like how it shows that you are a strong person. Doubts are those nagging little things that chip away at us and make it hard to trust, but realizing that is half the battle. You go, girl!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much! Wow, I'm so lifted up by my family at fanstory. I just love this safe place to be real and creative.

    Thank you for the five stars too. :))
Comment from Teri7
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This is another very well written chapter you have penned. Sometimes we fret and worry needlessly because the battle is the Lords. The devil always wants to make us worry, but we can do all things through Christ who strengthens us. Keep on repeating the scripture, "Let not your heart be troubled......" All of God's word and promises are so true. It's just asking the Lord to keep it in your spirit. Ask the Holy Spirit for His help. He will help you. I am living proof of that! May God bless you my friend. love, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    OH Terri, your words are timed perfectly because I've been doing a constant ping and pong with my fears/ worry. I realize I am fretting, I throw them back at God. Thanks for encouraging me and for reviewing my piece. I love the 5 stars too. :)) Love ya
Comment from Commando
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A "Salute," my dear friend!
My prayers are on God's desk for your Dad. Quite an "Awesome Writer" you are. I enjoyed reading "Learning to Walk" immensely. The message you sent out is "Crystal clear to me." The elephant by "FanArtReview" is "Astonishing." Thanks for sharing this "Magnificent Chapter," best wishes, and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, Bill. You sure help me stand a little taller after reading your review! Thanks! :))

    I appreciate the 5 star as well!!

    Even more, thank you for your prayers!!!
reply by Commando on 29-Jan-2020
    A 2nd "SALUTE!" Sorry I had no 6 stars. God Bless,
    Bill
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Aw, that you wanted to give me one, means so much! Thanks Bill
reply by Commando on 29-Jan-2020
    Hugs!
Comment from Writingfundimension
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I found this post quite moving. In particular, I resonated with the following:
'Trust is a big issue for me, with so much abuse as a child, trust is not a word I've known. But, I refuse to be a victim...'
I can deeply relate to what you've written here. Very well done!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Oh thank you so much for this sweet review! I am thrilled that that part resonated with you. That is very encouraging.

    Thanks for the 5 stars as well!
reply by Writingfundimension on 30-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome.