Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Moonshine and Muscadine Wine "A Wartime Romance
23 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is an awesome read, you two! I loved it. No more sixes in my wallet, bit this is very deserving.
Just to say, I did watch you Tootie on YouTube. It's awesome to see writers succeed. Will keep following to find out about the next goings on.
Drew
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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This is an awesome read, you two! I loved it. No more sixes in my wallet, bit this is very deserving.
Just to say, I did watch you Tootie on YouTube. It's awesome to see writers succeed. Will keep following to find out about the next goings on.
Drew
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Hi Drew! So glad you loved this chapter! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Also, thank you for watching the video. Yes, all is going well with the business. HURRAH! Glad you will be following along. Chapter 21 is currently posted, and we're working on Chapter 22 which will be coming soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mistydawn
You guys are getting too good at leaving us hanging like this; so stop it already, lol. I'm just kidding. I do hope that Billy wasn't seriously hurt. Your chapter is well-written, it's very interesting, I love the bits of humor you threw in. Grandpa seems like quite a character, grandma too. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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You guys are getting too good at leaving us hanging like this; so stop it already, lol. I'm just kidding. I do hope that Billy wasn't seriously hurt. Your chapter is well-written, it's very interesting, I love the bits of humor you threw in. Grandpa seems like quite a character, grandma too. Nicely done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Mistydawn, As you know, we can't stop with those cliffhangers! lol We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter, as well as all the others. Your continued support means the world to us. Thank you so much! Glad Grandma's personality is starting to come out for the readers, too. Both Grandpa and Grandma are quite the characters. We love including them in our book! Stayed tuned for Chapter 21. It's already been written and is going to be posted very soon! All the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a terrible place to end this chapter! I'm just glad that Bill was thrown clear, but all those other people! Are they dead? What a terrible this to happen. I'm glad Grampa is out of the woods, but had to smile at his not allowed anymore alcohol, but sex is fine! LOL. Well done, this part had everything, tears, good news, bad news, romance, and then you cap it off with a train crash! I can't wait for the next part! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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That was a terrible place to end this chapter! I'm just glad that Bill was thrown clear, but all those other people! Are they dead? What a terrible this to happen. I'm glad Grampa is out of the woods, but had to smile at his not allowed anymore alcohol, but sex is fine! LOL. Well done, this part had everything, tears, good news, bad news, romance, and then you cap it off with a train crash! I can't wait for the next part! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Sandra- Your review was duplicated for some reason. That's okay. Your beautiful smile makes us smile too! All the best to you.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a terrible place to end this chapter! I'm just glad that Bill was thrown clear, but all those other people! Are they dead? What a terrible this to happen. I'm glad Grampa is out of the woods, but had to smile at his not allowed anymore alcohol, but sex is fine! LOL. Well done, this part had everything, tears, good news, bad news, romance, and then you cap it off with a train crash! I can't wait for the next part! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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That was a terrible place to end this chapter! I'm just glad that Bill was thrown clear, but all those other people! Are they dead? What a terrible this to happen. I'm glad Grampa is out of the woods, but had to smile at his not allowed anymore alcohol, but sex is fine! LOL. Well done, this part had everything, tears, good news, bad news, romance, and then you cap it off with a train crash! I can't wait for the next part! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Sandra, You know how it is--we have to throw in those cliffhangers! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Great comments! Thanks also for your continued support. It means so much to us! Chapter 21 has been written and will be posted very soon, so stay tuned! All the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Shirley McLain
A good chapter to read. It had levity as well as seriousness. The actions of your characters kept me reading and the dialogue was great. You did a very good job. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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A good chapter to read. It had levity as well as seriousness. The actions of your characters kept me reading and the dialogue was great. You did a very good job. Shirley
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Shirley, Your continued support means so much to us! Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. We like how you mention that it has levity and keeps you reading. It's definitely character driven (and what characters we are! lol). Chapter 21 has been written and will be posted very soon. Wishing you the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you captured my heart with this story. I am worried about Bill. I usually am after reading your posts. So Grandpa needs to stay away from Moonshine. I wonder if he'll be able to do it. Thank you for writing another great post.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Once again you captured my heart with this story. I am worried about Bill. I usually am after reading your posts. So Grandpa needs to stay away from Moonshine. I wonder if he'll be able to do it. Thank you for writing another great post.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Barbara, Thank you for the AWESOME six star rating and review. YAHOO! You're the BEST! Your continued support means the world to us. Not sure yet if Grandpa will be able to stay away from that Moonshine. Stay tuned. Chapter 21 has been written and will be posted soon! Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from JLR
I a such a fan! Every time I read your works, the reading evokes memories of the past. Our paths were near in the sixties - about the same time although you were a handful of years ahead in time. The trains, the Red Cross helping when the needs were urgent and finally the emoting of such fine phrases as this:
"My darlin', you are finer than a frog hair split three ways! Yes, indeed!" I replied.
How could you not love this read?
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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I a such a fan! Every time I read your works, the reading evokes memories of the past. Our paths were near in the sixties - about the same time although you were a handful of years ahead in time. The trains, the Red Cross helping when the needs were urgent and finally the emoting of such fine phrases as this:
"My darlin', you are finer than a frog hair split three ways! Yes, indeed!" I replied.
How could you not love this read?
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hi JLR! HURRAH! HURRAH! Thank you so much for the AWESOME six star rating and review! Also, thank you for your support and being a fan! We are HONORED! A double "SALUTE" to you! We are SO GLAD you love our story. Chapter 21 has been written and will be posted very soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Bill & Cathy,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow with good-bad news, tragic-comic, and humorous touch throughout from the beginning to the end - the End, as usual, the catchy End which remains particularly noteworthy.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hello Bill & Cathy,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow with good-bad news, tragic-comic, and humorous touch throughout from the beginning to the end - the End, as usual, the catchy End which remains particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hi RPSaxena! HURRAH! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and review. We are HONORED and double "SALUTE' you! Thank you also for your continued support. It means so much to us. We are happy you are enjoying the story and cliff hangers. Chapter 21 has been written and will be posted very soon, so stay tuned! Have a wonderful Sunday! God Bless, our friend!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Bill & Cathy, Most Welcome!
You REALLY deserve it.
&
Thanks for Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Good heavens, it is amazing this man is still alive. Grandpa is fine but now Bill has been in another accident. I think he better marry Cathy asap so she can get his life ins. =] Guess I'll have to wait to see what happens. Rox
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Good heavens, it is amazing this man is still alive. Grandpa is fine but now Bill has been in another accident. I think he better marry Cathy asap so she can get his life ins. =] Guess I'll have to wait to see what happens. Rox
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hi Rox! Love your comments here! :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. There are always cliff hangers and Bill has a way of finding himself in all sorts of situations! You won't have to wait long to find out what happens. Chapter 21 has already been written and will be posted very soon! Have a wonderful Sunday! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Grandpa is very funny, even if the news he received is not quite a good news. Generally speaking this chapter is funny and leaves the war behind "Hey, Y'all! A Salute, Grandma! So, it's because of you biting Grandpa's tongue that I'm here today, huh? Hurray!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Grandpa is very funny, even if the news he received is not quite a good news. Generally speaking this chapter is funny and leaves the war behind "Hey, Y'all! A Salute, Grandma! So, it's because of you biting Grandpa's tongue that I'm here today, huh? Hurray!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hi Iza! Yes, Grandpa is funny, and so is Bill. Thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your continued support means so much to us. Thank you also for pointing out that particular line of Bill's. :) Chapter 21 is already written and will be posted very soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
