holding space
a 20 word poem5 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Perfect in all aspects Judester. It made me think and had it sink in to appreciate it to the full. It is such a wise lesson! I will remember your little poem when I feel low and suffering about the distance that crept up between me and my daughter. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Perfect in all aspects Judester. It made me think and had it sink in to appreciate it to the full. It is such a wise lesson! I will remember your little poem when I feel low and suffering about the distance that crept up between me and my daughter. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thanks for thé revues and sparkly stars. Wish you both well.
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You earned them!
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks so much for joining in the contest. That is such a good way to say it - to acknowledge the reality of the pain and to offer space in heart and mind for the one who is grieving. Beautiful! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for joining in the contest. That is such a good way to say it - to acknowledge the reality of the pain and to offer space in heart and mind for the one who is grieving. Beautiful! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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You always get my poems so insightfully. Thanks for the review, cheers j
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Cheers. Yeah, like don't say "oh they are in a better place right now." sheesh.
Comment from padumachitta
Hello there, great photo, wow.
I like the idea of holding space, it is something not many do well...and something worth while learning. This wee poem brings that to mind, remembrances of friends just being there.
Good luck in the contest
padumachitta
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello there, great photo, wow.
I like the idea of holding space, it is something not many do well...and something worth while learning. This wee poem brings that to mind, remembrances of friends just being there.
Good luck in the contest
padumachitta
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the insightful review. Yeah, sometimes just being there quietly, is enough
Cheers, j
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Judester, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. I enjoyed your twenty word poem, I think you absolutely nailed it. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello Judester, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. I enjoyed your twenty word poem, I think you absolutely nailed it. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review 13. Everything is good this new year. Wishing you the best, cheers,j
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a short and sweet poem which well meets the guidelines of the twenty words of sympathy contest. The message is a simple one. The image is a great addition.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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This is a short and sweet poem which well meets the guidelines of the twenty words of sympathy contest. The message is a simple one. The image is a great addition.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review. Sometmes we just need to know that there is someone there
