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My Forever Valentine

love never dies

5 total reviews 
Comment from fluffnstuff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a definite AWE. Hope it isn't true you lost him? Surely not. Love never dies. nice writevvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvfluff

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    It was one of two definitely have died out of a third that could have a long time ago, from a total of four that definitely have wished he had.
    thxs again for your honorable rating, girl

    lulube
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Excellent
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Hello Lori, Well done! This a perfect poem with exactly the required syllable count. You did this without compromising the subject of your poem. This is a lovely entry - good luck. Love Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    thxs again, I actually thought I had replied to this one already, duh I was watching videos of my grand daughter. She cracks me up. Tamara puts them up on fanstory, it's easier for her to share them, but lousy for me to try and save them

    lulube

    lulube
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Lulube, a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your Valentine poem with us, it speaks of an endearing and undying love. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    A little rainy afternoon, good time to be on fanstory! and ditto to your day. thxs for your great comments and luck

    lulube
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautiful poem and tribute to your lost loved one, so much said in so few words-love is forever and more, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    thxs for awesome comments. Glad you enjoyed

    lulube
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
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"My Forever Valentine"
Is a Valentine Poem Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It was short but sweet, non the less.
And, good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    20 syllables contest, definitely short. lol thxs for your review. sometimes short and sweet is all one needs. lol

    lulube

    lulube