Happy Children
A 5-7-9 contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the music of children's laughter.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the music of children's laughter.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hi Sharon .Thanks so much it did delight my senses hearing their squeals of laughter. Cheers
Comment from Carl DeVere
This was a sweet pleasure. I don't have any children myself, but I always delight in watching and listening to their play. You're right. It always brings a smile.
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This was a sweet pleasure. I don't have any children myself, but I always delight in watching and listening to their play. You're right. It always brings a smile.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hi Carl, Thank you for your review. Yes I could hear their laughter as I walked along my track and it made me smile. Such innocence and fun. Cheers
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Joyous melodies of children laughter for sure is is music to one's ear and disgruntle to another, no joke aside I really liked this expression:"Joyous melodies
heard in children's symphonies
of laughter;" This is so reach and pure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Joyous melodies of children laughter for sure is is music to one's ear and disgruntle to another, no joke aside I really liked this expression:"Joyous melodies
heard in children's symphonies
of laughter;" This is so reach and pure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hi Iza, Thank for your review and good luck .The kids laughter made me feel happy too and I thought this might be a good one to enter Glad you enjoyed my symphony
Comment from JLR
I smiled when I read this and smiled, even more, when I read your notes. How amazing is it that in your walk you are present to see that which surrounds you. Kudo's fro being a human being, not a human doing!
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I smiled when I read this and smiled, even more, when I read your notes. How amazing is it that in your walk you are present to see that which surrounds you. Kudo's fro being a human being, not a human doing!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hi JLR What a lovely review and yes I like being in the present and their laughter rang out and made me smile too Cheers
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a terrific Tuesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-9 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow poet a terrific Tuesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-9 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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Hi the13thpoet, Thanks you for your review and good luck, their laughter made me smile Cheers
Comment from MamaBebop
Anonymous author,
This is such a sweet and joyful poem. Reminds me of that first warm day after winter has been with us for so long and the children's laughter on the playground seems louder and more harmonious than usual.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings, MB
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Anonymous author,
This is such a sweet and joyful poem. Reminds me of that first warm day after winter has been with us for so long and the children's laughter on the playground seems louder and more harmonious than usual.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings, MB
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hi MB Thanks for your review, and good luck ,the kids sounded like they were having so much fun it was nice to hear them laughing in their play Cheer
