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Our Married Love

When you find your soulmate, he is one of a kind.

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful Valentine poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Valentines Day is our 33rd wedding anniversary. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your excellent and beautiful review of my Valentine's poem. Happy upcoming 33rd Anniversary to you both! God bless you. Love, Mary Kay
Comment from Sally Law
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I hope you printed this out for your husband as a gift, Mary Kay. How sweet and refreshing to see a happily united couple. I rejoice with you!!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the poetry contest,
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your lovely review, Sally! We don't have a printer, but I will print this out for Jorge, when I can. I did show it to him! Thank you for all the sweet and kind things you wrote. God bless you! xoxo
reply by Sally Law on 28-Jan-2020
    You two are adorably sweet together. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, Sally! You should only observe how people react to the two of us in person, at doctor visits, restaurants etc., we get words like "adorable," "cute," "funny," "sweet," it can really be fun! The fact that Jorge can clown around "ad infinitum" only enhances it :-D
    We are truly blessed.
Comment from lyenochka
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You used all twenty syllables well to describe that kind of love that the Lord meant when He brought man and wife together from the very beginning.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Helen, what a beautiful review of my love poem, yes, I believe that is so true! God is so good.
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Our Married Love"
Is a Valentine's Poem Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great week!
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Doc Ricky for your great review and comments. Have a blessed week, too! - Mary Kay
Comment from Susan X Smith
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I am not sure if this poem is following any particular style. It is short and sweet with a lovely romantic message. It appears to be a tribute to a successful marriage.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Yes, our marriage is successful and loving, and we give God the praise. The poem is part of a 20-syllable Valentine's Day contest, but those are the only requirements. Thanks for your excellent review.
Comment from Therese Caron
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Loving and romantic, and very deep when you talk about souls. Lovely little Valentine, and the picture you used complements your writing beautifully. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and thoughtful feedback. I appreciate it!
Comment from Tina Crute
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This is just beautiful. It has a sunny feel to it because of the background, but also because of the excitement in your poem. This is a lovely valentine poem! I like that it is different, not all pink and red:)

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much, Tina, for your excellent review and sweet comments. xoxo
reply by Tina Crute on 28-Jan-2020
    You are welcome sweet friend!
    I wanted to tell you since
    you're one of my favs on here...
    I won't be on fanstory
    much for awhile. I'm working on
    a facebook page and blog,
    and since I am un-techno, it will
    take me big patches of time to
    figure it all out. I am posting
    devotionals. I see so many who
    need encouragement in today's
    crazy world! I told
    you and just a couple others
    so you don't think anything's
    wrong:) Keep writing and I
    will read in a few days! I
    appreciate the encouragement
    you've given me! Hugs,
    Tina
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Tina, for letting me know, and for everything you wrote to me, you're so kind!
    I know how it is when you're getting involved in something -- it's hard to maintain attention in your other interests. Since I've started on FanStory, my time on Facebook is about 5% of what it was before. I need a better balance, actually.
    Please let me know when your blog is ready, so I can take a look.
    God bless you in all you're doing, my friend! Hugs back to you and love, Mary Kay
reply by Tina Crute on 28-Jan-2020
    Oh, your'e welcome...I just wanted yall to know I will still read once a week. I am still a fan:)
    In your search bar on facebook, you should be able to out Simply Lovely in, and find me. I will talk to you in
    a few days!
    Tina
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    Thank you Tina, I will look you up in Facebook. xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    There were numerous Facebook pages called "Simply Lovely," although some were selling products.
    I found one that might be yours. The first post I see is "All Heroes Are Shadows of Christ." Another one is "The Forgetfulness of Jesus." And the one after that is, "7 Prayers to Pray for Your Kids." I think this is yours, but I also left a visitor post, asking. I will see if you answer!
reply by Tina Crute on 28-Jan-2020
    The heroes, forgetfulness and
    Prayer posts are all ones
    I posted. Most of the Simply
    Lovely sites are groups
    and mine is a page. The
    cover photo is a blue sky
    with cherry blossoms
    on the left side. I will go
    check messages!
    Thanks for looking me up:)
reply by Tina Crute on 28-Jan-2020
    I can't find your post where you
    asked...looking hard. I did get
    notification was that you liked
    my page:)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Now I am sure that I have the right page, Yay! You will probably find my post among your "Visitor Posts." Sometimes people don't know to look there. You have a very lovely Simply Lovely page! :-) xoxo
reply by Tina Crute on 29-Jan-2020
    Thanks! I went to visitor posts
    and nothing was there...maybe the mail is slow, lol. I'll check again!
    Tina
Comment from Raul1
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much, Raul.
reply by Raul1 on 27-Jan-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Aaaaah... what could be more romantic than a Valentine's wedding poem!! ;) Lovely offering for this limited format contest with a nice little spice of rhyme! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! :)

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much, I appreciate everything you wrote.