A Boy and His Friend
A Tetravalent for Dolly16 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about the little boy and his friend, the little lamb. You used great descriptive words and such adorable imagery from the picture of a little boy and lamb. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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June, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about the little boy and his friend, the little lamb. You used great descriptive words and such adorable imagery from the picture of a little boy and lamb. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I?m happy you could relate to this piece. Young children are very much in tuned to animals and pets. It?s innocence at its best. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful vision in Dolly's tetravalent, Joan -- maybe it's because I'm a mom of little boys, this one really touches me. You know, it is the mom's out there that know just how tender the heart is inside of her boys and now young men... the world sees their 'tough' but mom knows their heart! :) Thanx so much for this beautiful interlude for the evening! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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What a wonderful vision in Dolly's tetravalent, Joan -- maybe it's because I'm a mom of little boys, this one really touches me. You know, it is the mom's out there that know just how tender the heart is inside of her boys and now young men... the world sees their 'tough' but mom knows their heart! :) Thanx so much for this beautiful interlude for the evening! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I?m happy you could relate to this piece. Young children are very much in tuned to animals and pets. It?s innocence at its best. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tetravalent Poem about a boy who don't want a toy but only a little lamb to be his friend for life. A bond between human and animal is always amazing.
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A very well-written Tetravalent Poem about a boy who don't want a toy but only a little lamb to be his friend for life. A bond between human and animal is always amazing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Comment from Rikki66
Jerry had a little lamb, Their bond is obvious they will love and care one for the other through time. well done as a poem do you ever expand to prose. this would make a good flash story.
RikkiLXXIII
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Jerry had a little lamb, Their bond is obvious they will love and care one for the other through time. well done as a poem do you ever expand to prose. this would make a good flash story.
RikkiLXXIII
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
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My pleasure,
Rikki
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness June! You touched my heart strings here with this loving write and I wish I had a six for you. This is so warm and embracing and you did the Tetravalent justice, (just one rhyme missed on the second syllable of the couplet to rhyme with (toy). This is magical and much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness June! You touched my heart strings here with this loving write and I wish I had a six for you. This is so warm and embracing and you did the Tetravalent justice, (just one rhyme missed on the second syllable of the couplet to rhyme with (toy). This is magical and much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just perfect, June. Excellent iambic metre all the rhymes and cross rhymes written in where they should be and without skipping a beat.
Excellent tetravalent and I'm sure Dolly will love it. :))
Gloria
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This is just perfect, June. Excellent iambic metre all the rhymes and cross rhymes written in where they should be and without skipping a beat.
Excellent tetravalent and I'm sure Dolly will love it. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this fun little piece! It was a joy to write. Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Beautifully written, June! Perfect rhythm and rhyming structure. And such a touching piece! Nothing like a child and their pet to show what genuine love is all about!
Thank you for your lovely piece!
xoxo
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Beautifully written, June! Perfect rhythm and rhyming structure. And such a touching piece! Nothing like a child and their pet to show what genuine love is all about!
Thank you for your lovely piece!
xoxo
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun little piece! Thank you for sharing your sentiments!
Comment from Irish Rain
What a wonderful poem for this lovely
form.
The picture is such a good match too.
Boys share such a friendship with
their pets, it's quite enviable.
Loved this,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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What a wonderful poem for this lovely
form.
The picture is such a good match too.
Boys share such a friendship with
their pets, it's quite enviable.
Loved this,
Blessings...
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun little piece! Thank you for sharing your insights!
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You're welcome, Happy Tuesday!!
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad you were inspired by Dolly's new form with its complex rhyme scheme to create a Tetravalent poem of your own. You captured a special friendship and your use of alliteration intensified the mood. Cheers- Joan
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I am glad you were inspired by Dolly's new form with its complex rhyme scheme to create a Tetravalent poem of your own. You captured a special friendship and your use of alliteration intensified the mood. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you! It was a fun challenge. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think tis is a lovely verse about the boy and his lamb.
Well written and well rhymed.
The picture is a beautiful match as well.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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I think tis is a lovely verse about the boy and his lamb.
Well written and well rhymed.
The picture is a beautiful match as well.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts.
