The Veil Between Worlds
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Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Thank you for your inspired piece of poetry and notes. I believe you have something of an opened eye into the sheer wisdom of man. I believe your comments are not very far at all from truth.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your inspired piece of poetry and notes. I believe you have something of an opened eye into the sheer wisdom of man. I believe your comments are not very far at all from truth.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Mike, I read your interesting author notes first as you suggested - so interesting. Your poem is beautiful and very well written. Every stanza in this work asks a question. The best answer is in your final stanza -
we are the center
of all things loved
by our Creator........ lovely......
We are but stardust!
We are such stuff as dreams are made on and our little lives are rounded with a sleep-Shakespeare.
I loved your thoughtful poem - thank you for posting - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hello Mike, I read your interesting author notes first as you suggested - so interesting. Your poem is beautiful and very well written. Every stanza in this work asks a question. The best answer is in your final stanza -
we are the center
of all things loved
by our Creator........ lovely......
We are but stardust!
We are such stuff as dreams are made on and our little lives are rounded with a sleep-Shakespeare.
I loved your thoughtful poem - thank you for posting - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a beautiful poem and I am glad I read your author notes first. I love "do we exist or are we dreaming?". I cannot say I spend a lot of time pondering my own existence, but I ponder the existence of people as a whole, why some are born into luck, and some are born into misery. Your poem helps me with that. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work!
Terry
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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This is a beautiful poem and I am glad I read your author notes first. I love "do we exist or are we dreaming?". I cannot say I spend a lot of time pondering my own existence, but I ponder the existence of people as a whole, why some are born into luck, and some are born into misery. Your poem helps me with that. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work!
Terry
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Wow! I had no idea this poem would be so special. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mike. This is an interesting read. You have some profound statements that double as questions. My favorite is, "your truth lives within your spirit." That is a truth.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello Mike. This is an interesting read. You have some profound statements that double as questions. My favorite is, "your truth lives within your spirit." That is a truth.
Robert
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're welcome
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Papamike, Your articulation and creativity in your poem deserves a six. This seemed to sum up our existence very nicely. One often wonders if this is real or a dream state and ai enjoyed your interpretation .a worthy read Cheers Christine
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Hi Papamike, Your articulation and creativity in your poem deserves a six. This seemed to sum up our existence very nicely. One often wonders if this is real or a dream state and ai enjoyed your interpretation .a worthy read Cheers Christine
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Wow! I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from June Sargent
What food for thought you have given us on this lovely piece! We are but amoeba in comparison to the grandeur of inner and outer space. And we must humbly acknowledge that the more we learn, the less we know. Thanks for the reminder.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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What food for thought you have given us on this lovely piece! We are but amoeba in comparison to the grandeur of inner and outer space. And we must humbly acknowledge that the more we learn, the less we know. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Gail Denham
Nice job - and do you often wonder why God chose us - sent His Son to die for our sins - for the sins of all, if they believe. Wow. Almighty God - thinking of me- of you. I like your notes - thinking of how small we are - looking at the stars.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Nice job - and do you often wonder why God chose us - sent His Son to die for our sins - for the sins of all, if they believe. Wow. Almighty God - thinking of me- of you. I like your notes - thinking of how small we are - looking at the stars.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thank for your kind words and encouraging review.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
I liked the fragmented format of this, it creates an abstract articulation of experience, much like the experience we have in real life where things are happening both on and under the surface. This was also a colorful poem, not only full of rhythm but vivid images of nebulae and stars, glimpsed through that veil as if in a dream. In the end, on our journey through the universe, it is that human face, that emotion of love, that stands apart from the physical experience. estory
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I liked the fragmented format of this, it creates an abstract articulation of experience, much like the experience we have in real life where things are happening both on and under the surface. This was also a colorful poem, not only full of rhythm but vivid images of nebulae and stars, glimpsed through that veil as if in a dream. In the end, on our journey through the universe, it is that human face, that emotion of love, that stands apart from the physical experience. estory
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem travels from the universe to humans to God. It shows us the questions we ask and gives us God's answer.
Keep writing
Have a great week.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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This poem travels from the universe to humans to God. It shows us the questions we ask and gives us God's answer.
Keep writing
Have a great week.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Sometime we are surprised by how much our words move readers.
You're welcome , Mike
Joan
Comment from Lester Taylor Jr
Beautiful, amazing, thought provoking ! Your poem had more content in it's simplicity than a whole semester of biology and astrology combined. Thank you for this piece of work.
May God continue to inspire and Bless you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Beautiful, amazing, thought provoking ! Your poem had more content in it's simplicity than a whole semester of biology and astrology combined. Thank you for this piece of work.
May God continue to inspire and Bless you.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Wow! I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
