The Veil Between Worlds
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Comment from Badger_29
Simply amazing and profound, reflection of some of my writing and my subconscious dreams that contain the innate knowledge l was born with, our secret yearning to discover and share the purpose for existence.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful writing, which reminds me that even in the midst of my obstacles and trials, sectors always a brighter larger more realistic perspective.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Simply amazing and profound, reflection of some of my writing and my subconscious dreams that contain the innate knowledge l was born with, our secret yearning to discover and share the purpose for existence.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful writing, which reminds me that even in the midst of my obstacles and trials, sectors always a brighter larger more realistic perspective.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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This poem touched a lot of people. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very nice poem. I like the galaxy reference and the questions about our purpose and existence. Good rhythm and flow. Very nicely done. The accompanying picture was a great choice as well Gretchen
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Very nice poem. I like the galaxy reference and the questions about our purpose and existence. Good rhythm and flow. Very nicely done. The accompanying picture was a great choice as well Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you for stopping by!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from BeasPeas
Super job on this fine poem, Mike. How often I have thought that we may be just an amoeba, a cell, floating in the body/blood of the Eternal God. Very nice poem, indeed. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Super job on this fine poem, Mike. How often I have thought that we may be just an amoeba, a cell, floating in the body/blood of the Eternal God. Very nice poem, indeed. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. I wrote it four times to get what I wanted. I didn't think much about it when I posted it and it blew up! Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Mastery
Hi Mike. This is certainly a well crafted free verse poem. From start to finish it is chocked full of imagination and yet it touches the real world above us somehow. Great job. :) Bob
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Mike. This is certainly a well crafted free verse poem. From start to finish it is chocked full of imagination and yet it touches the real world above us somehow. Great job. :) Bob
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We don't really know for sure what is out there and we can only see so far, but at the moment this is infinity and will remain so until we learn differently, your poem touches on the magical and the unknown here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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We don't really know for sure what is out there and we can only see so far, but at the moment this is infinity and will remain so until we learn differently, your poem touches on the magical and the unknown here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bicpen
Its travels well with a cosmic and cell like relationship clearly pronouncing itself from within the image of its voice. I let it speak to me and it says that it has a foundation rooted in a firm sentiment given the eye of knowledge a peek and a question of ethereal proportions. It gathers well in its construction with good flow and a rather streamline coherence and existence.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Its travels well with a cosmic and cell like relationship clearly pronouncing itself from within the image of its voice. I let it speak to me and it says that it has a foundation rooted in a firm sentiment given the eye of knowledge a peek and a question of ethereal proportions. It gathers well in its construction with good flow and a rather streamline coherence and existence.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very interesting poem! I've always wondered about our place in this universe and where ours ends does another begin. I think we have to wonder whether there are other places like Earth and our galaxy. If God made our Earth and us, couldn't He just as easily have made more Earths and more people. We have to keep our minds open for any possibilities. I've always said that maybe we are a speck of sand on some beach in the universe. Maybe there are those looking through a microscope at us. Wow! This is way too heavy to be talking about before bedtime! LOL
God bless!
Patty
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This is a very interesting poem! I've always wondered about our place in this universe and where ours ends does another begin. I think we have to wonder whether there are other places like Earth and our galaxy. If God made our Earth and us, couldn't He just as easily have made more Earths and more people. We have to keep our minds open for any possibilities. I've always said that maybe we are a speck of sand on some beach in the universe. Maybe there are those looking through a microscope at us. Wow! This is way too heavy to be talking about before bedtime! LOL
God bless!
Patty
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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MIke you are so welcome for the review! If I'd had a six star to give out it would have been for this poem. If we think hard about it, it's not so far fetched. Also, I'm not dissing God, with all respect, He could have just as easily have made another earth somewhere that He loves as much as us. I wonder when we get to Heaven if we will get some of those answers. You really sparked my brain going with your poem!!
Bless ya!
Patty
Comment from Dancemom
This is a lovely free verse poem that honors God through comparisons to space. Your poem is well written and had a nice flow to it. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This is a lovely free verse poem that honors God through comparisons to space. Your poem is well written and had a nice flow to it. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Susan Larson
I love this. Growing up catholic, one thing that stands out for me is that we were told that in the chalice the priest poured a significant amount of wine and only one drop of water. The wine symbolizes God and the water, everyone who has ever and will ever live. You expressed that very well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I love this. Growing up catholic, one thing that stands out for me is that we were told that in the chalice the priest poured a significant amount of wine and only one drop of water. The wine symbolizes God and the water, everyone who has ever and will ever live. You expressed that very well.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Fascinating journey you take us on searching for the meaning of our life. And your conclusion that this is to be discovered within our own spirit is so thought-provoking!
Well done! I enjoyed this very much! xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Fascinating journey you take us on searching for the meaning of our life. And your conclusion that this is to be discovered within our own spirit is so thought-provoking!
Well done! I enjoyed this very much! xoxo
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I had no idea how special this poem would be. Many thanks for your kind words and encouraging review!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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I only wish I would have a six for you as this was most worthy. :)
