My Valentine Lost
A Rhyming contest entry...12 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What is it with you and the 'saddies' lately? Does this cold Michigan winter have you with the 'blues'?....Nope! I know what it is: it's too much Dylan!! Stop! LOL! LOL! :) :) You should be smiling...!!! ;)
This is a BEAUTIFUL offering for the contest, my friend, with a very special presentation and focus on the flowers and their placement at Valentine's -- well-done! ;) Good luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
What is it with you and the 'saddies' lately? Does this cold Michigan winter have you with the 'blues'?....Nope! I know what it is: it's too much Dylan!! Stop! LOL! LOL! :) :) You should be smiling...!!! ;)
This is a BEAUTIFUL offering for the contest, my friend, with a very special presentation and focus on the flowers and their placement at Valentine's -- well-done! ;) Good luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Well since I don?t have a Valentine of my own, I thought I would do one to honor my sister as she lost her boyfriend two years after they had met. They were engaged to be married, but he was killed in Afghanistan in 2010. Thank you for appreciating, just thought I?d give a shout out to all the ladies with out their soldiers this year. xoxo
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is a sad an touching tribute to the members of the military who made the ultimate sacrifice and to the people they left behind who loved them. It is a different but important slant on Valentine's Day.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
This poem is a sad an touching tribute to the members of the military who made the ultimate sacrifice and to the people they left behind who loved them. It is a different but important slant on Valentine's Day.
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I think so too! So many will not again spend this day with their love. My heart goes out to them. Thank you for your time and feedback!