It was always you
What the art gave me10 total reviews
Comment from WalkerMan
Here in a six-panel picture is a lifetime of togetherness for a couple who met in childhood and went the distance to love eternal. The tree symbolizes their time on Earth. Your beautiful ten words, perfectly superimposed, say it all. Lovely. Such is the life most of us dream of, but few actually live. Superb.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Here in a six-panel picture is a lifetime of togetherness for a couple who met in childhood and went the distance to love eternal. The tree symbolizes their time on Earth. Your beautiful ten words, perfectly superimposed, say it all. Lovely. Such is the life most of us dream of, but few actually live. Superb.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Oh my!! Thank you ever so much for the poetic review and the brilliant bling of the 6 rating!
I?m humbled x
Always
Justafan
Missy
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You are most welcome, Missy. If I could find the true originator of the image and could confirm permission to use it in the pending Third Edition of my literary art book ( Till Shadows Have Eaten the Moon: Songs of Life and Love -- Second Edition [paperback] available here: http://www.amazon.com/reader/1544644167 ),
I'd offer you non-exclusive publication at ZERO cost to you and NO claim on your Copyright, plus a contributor's discount on the book. I used TinEye.com to find it, but it is so widespread on the Internet that I could not trace it to a reliable original source. Please consider this a compliment, though. (I have done this for several other FanStorians.) -- Mike
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You?re praise is humbling my sweet friend. I could not ask for more.
Missy
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More is on the way anyway, though that was my last Six for this week.
-- Mike
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice poem with very good words that came about from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Very good job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This is a very nice poem with very good words that came about from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Very good job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Teri. I really appreciate every review.
Alway
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Mark Valentine
What a cool love story told in pictures and tied together by your wonderfully profound words. Laying all of the pictures side by side like that allows for one to see the common thread that ties everything together - love.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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What a cool love story told in pictures and tied together by your wonderfully profound words. Laying all of the pictures side by side like that allows for one to see the common thread that ties everything together - love.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you Mark :)
Always
Justafan
Comment from Pantygynt
I am not really sure how to approach this as a poem. Its title is one word longer than its content. The points us back at the picture, which says it all, a progression through life from childhood to the grave.
I feel like giving it five just for the idea.
Yes that is what I will do,
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I am not really sure how to approach this as a poem. Its title is one word longer than its content. The points us back at the picture, which says it all, a progression through life from childhood to the grave.
I feel like giving it five just for the idea.
Yes that is what I will do,
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Gynt, thank you for the encouragement with the 5 :)
Always
Justafan
Comment from royowen
Such an emotive few words. The ekphrastic affect is most dramatic, from being childhood playmates to being lifetime lovers is so touching, and two graves side by side, reveals eternal lovers, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Such an emotive few words. The ekphrastic affect is most dramatic, from being childhood playmates to being lifetime lovers is so touching, and two graves side by side, reveals eternal lovers, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thank you sir. My reviews from you are always encouraging.
Always
Justafan
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Most welcome
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
This is great.
Between the picture and your poem it says exactly how a the circle of life is. I applaud your use of words and their arrangements. Good Job.
Thanks to sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is great.
Between the picture and your poem it says exactly how a the circle of life is. I applaud your use of words and their arrangements. Good Job.
Thanks to sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Oh my goodness, thank you! A 6 is highly coveted. I?m happy you found my work worthy.
Always
Justafan
Comment from Ulla
Hi Missy. So good to see you back yet again. Yes, the pictures says it all. There was always that one person in your life from the beginning to the end. Beautiful. A great one line poem. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Hi Missy. So good to see you back yet again. Yes, the pictures says it all. There was always that one person in your life from the beginning to the end. Beautiful. A great one line poem. Ulla xx
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Hi sweetie. I?m so happy to see you haven?t forgotten me. Lol
Thank you for the lovely review:)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from simonbagh
What a great fun you have created here and I see that you are a very talented person in this sector so please go on and create new ones well done and keep writing not to dry your bubbling Brook of Talent
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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What a great fun you have created here and I see that you are a very talented person in this sector so please go on and create new ones well done and keep writing not to dry your bubbling Brook of Talent
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Babbling brook, I don?t believe I?ve ever had myself described so! What fun :)
Again, thank you for the R&R.
As always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is so precious! A lifetime of love together. What a perfect poem it would be for Valentine's Day or an anniversary, or really anytime with the one you love, especially if it was the kind of love spanning a lifetime, depicted here. I don't know if it was only one of the photos that inspired you, or if they were all together that way, but I love the way they're set up -- even the way the tree changes.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is so precious! A lifetime of love together. What a perfect poem it would be for Valentine's Day or an anniversary, or really anytime with the one you love, especially if it was the kind of love spanning a lifetime, depicted here. I don't know if it was only one of the photos that inspired you, or if they were all together that way, but I love the way they're set up -- even the way the tree changes.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Aww, I?m delighted you liked this! Most all my works are Ekphrastic. The picture gave me the words.
Always
Justafan
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You're very welcome. And now I know what "ekphrastic" means!
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No insult intended
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Hahahaha! No, I didn't think "ekphrastic" was a bad word!
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Lol good
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;-D
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful one-line poem offering... sometimes there's just always that one person there...our whole lives through! :) Thanx for sharing that smile today! ;)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A wonderful one-line poem offering... sometimes there's just always that one person there...our whole lives through! :) Thanx for sharing that smile today! ;)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thank you again :)
Always
Justafan
