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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Heart Fulfilled (A)"A Collection of Pain.
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Comment from WryWriter
The journey from loss to the gift of life, from life to success we cannot regret. For God's great plan sets life's stage. Onward we go day by day. A fabulous pen you've made.
One question:
"Hearts are sometimes Broken... "Taken away as if a mere Tokrn.. (Was this a typo: "Tokrn" supposed to be "Token"?)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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The journey from loss to the gift of life, from life to success we cannot regret. For God's great plan sets life's stage. Onward we go day by day. A fabulous pen you've made.
One question:
"Hearts are sometimes Broken... "Taken away as if a mere Tokrn.. (Was this a typo: "Tokrn" supposed to be "Token"?)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review and correction
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your son's heart gave a chance to new and good life to 3 people and I'm pretty sure that he brought a little bit of personality and taste in the new life that shaped into light.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Your son's heart gave a chance to new and good life to 3 people and I'm pretty sure that he brought a little bit of personality and taste in the new life that shaped into light.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thanks Iza.
You got that right.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from xvi
Such a touching story. I really loved the start here, and it was very apparent the pain of loss that was used to write the start of this story. I love the numerical order of the letters that came from Chaz as well. It is an organizational device, but it also provides the right amount of anticipation as to what happened and is happening.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Such a touching story. I really loved the start here, and it was very apparent the pain of loss that was used to write the start of this story. I love the numerical order of the letters that came from Chaz as well. It is an organizational device, but it also provides the right amount of anticipation as to what happened and is happening.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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To receive those letters and then later on, the replies to my letters was an amazing gift.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Ricky1024
As I was reading I could feel the pain and Unhappiness of your words about your Son Jason. It must of been very hard for you to write about your son's death. Gert
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Hello Ricky1024
As I was reading I could feel the pain and Unhappiness of your words about your Son Jason. It must of been very hard for you to write about your son's death. Gert
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Actually the previous for a reviewer Ulla said something similar and I told her that it's basically journaling is how I handle it and I sent it out to you!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Hello Ricky
I'm not sure what you were saying in your last message to me.
Gert
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I'm finding most of the piece difficult to follow--- perhaps you intend to convey vague and choppy imagery? Heartwarming that your son's organs gave new life to others. I like that you talk about the letters you received from the families, not only at donation time but also some time afterward. all with happy endings. Too bad Jason had to die for them to live. My sympathies. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I'm finding most of the piece difficult to follow--- perhaps you intend to convey vague and choppy imagery? Heartwarming that your son's organs gave new life to others. I like that you talk about the letters you received from the families, not only at donation time but also some time afterward. all with happy endings. Too bad Jason had to die for them to live. My sympathies. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Sorry to see that you're giving this an average review when everybody else didn't I'm sure my son is disappointed also.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, my goodness... this one was so very hard to read (one eye closed) as you really got into the graphics of the organ transfer... just the fact that you were able to 'get through that' is amazing... Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Oh, my goodness... this one was so very hard to read (one eye closed) as you really got into the graphics of the organ transfer... just the fact that you were able to 'get through that' is amazing... Yvette
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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When I write about the complete operation especially the little girl who received Jason's kidney that was jaundiced it's as if I'm there watching it but I really ain't them imagining it.
Thanks Yvette.
Ricky
