Comment from ngage

Excellent

Exceptional chapter, Ms Shana! If I had six stars, they'd be yours. Loved the drama and all the action. It captivated me from the beginning to the end. I just hope Jena didn't die. Although, I'm sure you have a surprise chapter waiting. I look forward to the next!

Nate

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, Nate :)

So excited to here you enjoyed another chapter. This was fun but definitely difficult to write. Planning the action takes some time. Although, in the end, it's all worth it!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello scongrove
I have to say you do very well keeping track of all the various interesting from of life. I want to Thank you for a reference for terms and cast of characters, especially for new readers:
Gert

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, Gert :)

I appreciate your review. Yes, it is difficult at times to keep up with all the characters, but they sure are fun to create. Hope to hear back from you. Just a few more chapters in this book.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 28-Jan-2020

You are welcome scongrove
Gert

Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

Let her go?" Ashton said, squinting his shrewd luminous eyes, searching for the stranger among the thick cloud of smoke. "Who dares to tell me," he let out a deep-throated cackle, "what to do?~LOVE LOVE LOVE! This is so beautifully written. This whole paragraph is so good.

Well done! Lots of action and drama in this chapter! Good job. :))

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, dear friend! :)

I'm so happy you let me know which part of the scene your enjoyed. I worked on that paragraph for what seemed like days. LOL! Sometimes it's hard to figure out what your character will say during certain scenes.
Thanks so much for your review and support. It means so much!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Wow! Great chapter! Truly filled with great tension as well as action. Really wonderful descriptions as each scene is played out. The ending had me spellbound. Good job!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

This chapter took me a while to create, but in the end, it was all worth it, especially after reading your review. Just a few more chapters to come.

Thanks so much!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 28-Jan-2020

You are ever so welcome! It's been a joy for me to read about this world you've created. I am saddened that's this particular story is coming to an end. It's truly been an amazing read. Faye

reply by fm wright on 28-Jan-2020

You are ever so welcome! It's been a joy for me to read about this world you've created. I am saddened that's this particular story is coming to an end. It's truly been an amazing read. Faye

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I can't tell you enough how pleased I am because you put a complete synopsis of the previous chapters. It was so helpful in understanding this action-packed chapter. You certainly left it on a cliffhanger. Great job.
Shirley

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, Shirley :)

I am so happy to hear your liked the fact that I added the synopsis. Another reader told me I was telling too much of my story. As I see new readers pop in and out of the story, I feel that it is important to keep everyone updated.
Thrilled you enjoyed! Hope to hear back from you.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

Not Jenna too. Please don't do that to her. She's one of my favorites. Your story is well-written, interesting, very suspenseful you had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Your character's their actions and dialogue seem real, believable. They really came to life.
Ps. I'm so glad to see your post today. I was getting worried because you didn't post on your regular day. Guess you have a lot going on. Glad you're alright.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

Don't worry about Jena. Remember ... my stories always end like a fairytale. I was sick last weekend, so I posted a little late. It's so nice to know you were worried. You're so sweet!

Thanks for all your support. A few more chapters to go.
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by Mistydawn on 28-Jan-2020

I'm glad your better.

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

You are so, so good at these Shana. The fact that you can handle the descriptions of these scenes so easily, is amazing, I don't anything that I've read can match these images of the collective force of angels, the fury, and the total force of the covenant together, but the bonus was the Satanic force of the beast of Revelation appearing, well described, well researched, it only stops short of the final apocalyptic encounter of Satan and Christ. Well done my friend, as they say, very imaginative, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Ashton's unsettl(ing) reaction. Unsettled?

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you so much my dear friend :)

Wow! Your words really lifted my spirits. Sorry it has been a while to get back to thank you and read more of your precious posts. I've been sick with a nasty cold.
I do love writing about the light forces and all of God's amazing creations. It gives me such a peaceful outlook on life.

Thanks for catching the typo too! You are very supportive and helpful.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Vividly petrifying! Quite a monstrous cast of characters. Vertical slits in golden eyes, blood acidic red. Black hairs sprouting from every pore---I like gorilla guys but not an attractive look on the ladies. Keep the chills coming. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thank you, Elizabeth :)

So glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter. I do have a lot of grizzly creatures in my stories. LOL! They are all so fun to create. My imagination sometimes scares me.
Hope to hear from you again. A few more chapters to go!

Sincerely,
Shana :)