Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

A truly awesome 5-7-5 post for this writing prompt. Your selected artwork is a perfect companion to your text. You did an excellent job of informing us of the environmental crisis the world is facing on our not so perfect Earth.

IMHO ... if you increase the font size (bold too?), the FS community might see your presentation in a different way.

Good luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020

Thanks for the kind review and sparkly stars. Do you mean make the words bigger and darker? I will try and what does IMHO mean please. cheers.

reply by Mark D. R. on 26-Jan-2020

IMHO = in my humble opinion in shorthand email lingo

Yes, try using a larger type size and bold if you want in the advanced editor mode

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020

Thanks Marc, it looks so much better, bold and cursive font. Good lesson for me today..IMHO, hah. Cheers, j

Comment from May 1

Excellent

That is so wonderfully written and I am impressed that so few words can create such a powerful image in my mind. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review May. I had the image of a weary mother earth yelling at us to stay off the freshly~waxed floors. haha. Have a great sunday, cheers.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Pristine Floors"
Is a 5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020

Thanks for the review.