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Comment from JudyE
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I know what you're saying and I'm guilty of reading and moving on too. I find it hard to reach the required number of characters sometimes unless I can find a mistake or two. I'll try harder in future in leave some comments - not just on your work but others too. And just so you know, it's never about the money with me.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
    Thanks JudyE My phoney money is all stacked up again waiting for my next post but I don't go looking for the money all the time myself. A good story or poem will be a hit for me at times. Another post is coming real soon re recent hospital and other stuff.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Doesn't that first stanza say it all? Really does make you wonder.

Have noticed where I used to at least achieve Recognized status on everything I wrote, I now am fortunate to receive 5 to 8 reviews.

Guess that's because I write stories and for the way too many poets on this site, it takes much too long to read a chapter when in that same amount of time they can quickly garnish Funny Money from ten 5-7-5 or shorter poems.

Oh well, I refuse to simply write poetry to feed their addiction.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    I appreciate you bro. I told you about Beth Shelby read her biography about her and her hubby. Sally Law is continuing on after her court case and of course Fellow Aussie Tony Fawcus , Ulla and Barbara Wilkey prose writers. Fan them all, mate. Thanks again!
Comment from Dancemom
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This is a well written poem with a nice meter and rhyming pattern. I don't think it is a problem with the readers. Many poems get buried under those that are new or spent a lot on promotion.

Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    Thanks another new friend. Yes buried under the over promoted for sure. Some in here spend a LOT of money pushing their stuff.
Comment from Minglement
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You make a valid point a d I think you are right it is sometimes lack of incentive (reward in terms of points and 'dollars' pai there is so much great writing here a d so little time. Tha is for sharing. You aren't alone. God bless ;)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Hi there, thanks for the great review. You look like you have the same trouble with the keyboard I am having hehe. Will look for your stuff not sure we have met before.
reply by Minglement on 08-Feb-2020
    I don't think we have met before. Nice to meet you. For some reason I have trouble hitting the 'n' unless I make it a point to press it hard. Would welcome a review from you and your opinion :)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Try turning the keyboard upside down and shaking might have crumbs or something in there. I should point you to some stuff I have written about my keyboard problems. Partly due to legaL DRUGS i AM ON STUFF COMES OUT OF MY FINGERS AND WIPES OFF THE LETTERS ON THE KEYBOARD AS WELL. Sorry for the caps lock another problem hehe.
reply by Minglement on 08-Feb-2020
    okay, I'll try that. Sorry about the meds you are on causing you problems. Take care.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The drive-bys bother me too. I feel in today's world people just aren't as nice as we are. We're from a different time where values like being kind were important. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Glad you agree, Sis. I hope I will see your next chapter later today after church. We are skipping church today too wet.
Comment from Sugarray77
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The photography you choice really catches the eye and encourages us to read and review. Your free verse is well constructed and makes a good point that many of us here on FS often think about... at least I do... I seem to have the same thing happen to me. Go figure. Great read!

Melissa

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Thanks friend. Appreciate the lovely review and glad we are on the same page.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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For me it's just time. I don't have enough time to go through them all, however, if I read them I do try to review them. I know my stuff doesn't get the amount of reviews as other pieces but it's also because I don't promote them like others. Again, it goes back to time. I hope you figure out what it is for you though. We might all have different reasons this happens.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Thanks very much for the lovely review. Rule is read, review, write and promote....that way you build up the phoney money so you can post more and get more reviewers.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Geoff, yes I agree with you in this very well written poem. It flows very well and you say what you want to say in such an easy manner. I know what you mean. So many have a look and then only few leave a review. I would have loved to have a six for this. Kind regards.Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Thanks for the "virtual" SIX. Loved your review. Looking forward to Lorenzo later today.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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I'm sure everyone who reads this will be nodding in agreement! I have noticed the same thing. However, I don't take time to review un-promoted poems. Maybe I shouldn't be that way, but I NEVER post a poem until I'm able to promote it. Your poem is well-written and delightful!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Thanks Janice for the great review. I don't post stuff with out promotion almost every time. I think I have put up only a couple of non-promoted ones. The clue is to read review write promote and so on. My "phoney money" balance was pretty high until I promoted these last two offerings. Thanks again.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the many viewers that overwhelm the factual reviews. It happens to me too in my writing. In reviewing I often forgot I reviewed a certain poem and when I open the post I discover I already reviewed the poem or story before.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Hi Sis same here in thinking I had not reviewed sinethuing I did already. Thanks for coming by. I always appreciate your support thanks.