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Children of None

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Comment from Cindy Warren
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I can identify with this. I have an easy name, but I spent time in foster care and I know what it is to be on the outside. Some people have all the luck, while others have to make their own way in the world.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    You are so right about that. Growing up in foster care cannot have been easy at all - so difficult. Blessings,
    Carol
Comment from royowen
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Sounds like many children in the world who are "different". Our human race operates in a very narrow influence, always according to appearances, I'm not sure if the roles were reversed, nothing would change. Injustice would remain, as if there is a collective malaise hanging over us. Beautifully written Carol, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your insightful thoughts Roy - much appreciated! I do agree with you that injustice would remain. It seems to be human nature...
    Carol
reply by royowen on 26-Jan-2020
    Good job