To Dance with Fireflies
A Fantasy Poem for the Potlatch Challenge20 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This Fantasy poem, To Dance with Fireflies, follows this new-to-me formatting and creates a fun time in the evening with the glow bugs. Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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This Fantasy poem, To Dance with Fireflies, follows this new-to-me formatting and creates a fun time in the evening with the glow bugs. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Glad you liked this fun little piece!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely verse about dancing with fireflies. What fun.
The verse matches the amazing artwork perfectly.
I think that you've met the Fantasy challenge very well.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I think this is a lovely verse about dancing with fireflies. What fun.
The verse matches the amazing artwork perfectly.
I think that you've met the Fantasy challenge very well.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I'm glad this piece resonated with you. Always appreciate your dropping by to share your insights!
Comment from damommy
Omigosh, this is lovely. I could see the beauty of the fireflies in the night, but are gone by morning. I don't think one is ever too old to enjoy them. Down here, we call them lightning bugs. I love watching them.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Omigosh, this is lovely. I could see the beauty of the fireflies in the night, but are gone by morning. I don't think one is ever too old to enjoy them. Down here, we call them lightning bugs. I love watching them.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I'm glad this piece resonated with you. Always appreciate your dropping by to share your insights!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I do hope that you put on your most flowing, fullest night gown and dance with flowing motions.... because that's what your wonderful offering describes for me!! :) A lovely answer to the challenge, June, thanx for sharing it for today! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Oh, I do hope that you put on your most flowing, fullest night gown and dance with flowing motions.... because that's what your wonderful offering describes for me!! :) A lovely answer to the challenge, June, thanx for sharing it for today! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Phoenix Rising
Beautiful flow and dancing imagery. Such a wonderful piece of poetry.
I enjoyed the read very much. A tapestry of words that weave a charming fantasy. My pleasure to review, June.
Phoenix Rising
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Beautiful flow and dancing imagery. Such a wonderful piece of poetry.
I enjoyed the read very much. A tapestry of words that weave a charming fantasy. My pleasure to review, June.
Phoenix Rising
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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One of my favorite places - I am glad you liked it! Thanks for sharing your insights,
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
Good try at the club challenge. I like the topic you chose. I still like fireflies when I see them. They seem to be fewer in number as I
get older.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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June,
Good try at the club challenge. I like the topic you chose. I still like fireflies when I see them. They seem to be fewer in number as I
get older.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
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Any time, June.
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your fantasy poem for Potlatch Club, June. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines read well, the formatting is done correctly, the rhymes are in the right places, there is great imagery, and the overall idea of fantasy is well-expressed. Thanks for sharing, Respectfully with Love, Jan.
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You did a great job with your fantasy poem for Potlatch Club, June. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines read well, the formatting is done correctly, the rhymes are in the right places, there is great imagery, and the overall idea of fantasy is well-expressed. Thanks for sharing, Respectfully with Love, Jan.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this - it was a bit of a challenge, but I persisted. And I like the way it came out. I appreciate the positive feedback and the generous rating!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fantasy poem about dancing with the fireflies where the fragrant moonflowers bloom. Their twinkling lights enchant young minds.
NS fire-flies have two syllables according to syllable counter and dictionary.com
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A very well-written fantasy poem about dancing with the fireflies where the fragrant moonflowers bloom. Their twinkling lights enchant young minds.
NS fire-flies have two syllables according to syllable counter and dictionary.com
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
I miss the fireflies so. I have to recall them in a distant memory--
I love your beautiful poem and art illustration taking me back to my sighted life.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xx oxo
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I miss the fireflies so. I have to recall them in a distant memory--
I love your beautiful poem and art illustration taking me back to my sighted life.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xx oxo
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I'm glad this brought back some happy memories for you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A delightful dance with the fireflies June, lovely descriptions as you swirl and prance with their twinkling lights. Loved this one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A delightful dance with the fireflies June, lovely descriptions as you swirl and prance with their twinkling lights. Loved this one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I am so happy you enjoyed this fun little piece. It was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your insights and also for the generous rating!
