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The Resistance

Fixing our eyes on Jesus to make it through temptation!

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Comment from Gail Denham
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And the verse "He was tempted in the same way we are " - (paraphrased) But provides a way of escape from that temptation. Thank God there is Jesus who forgives and the Holy Spirit to guide us, give us direction. I depend on that.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from rjuselius
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This is a brilliant piece of spiritual poetry dear Fonda! Indeed, christ leads,us away from sin.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from RShipp
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Your poster-picture went perfectly with your three line poem.

Blessing to you this weekend.

Best of luck with the three Line Poetry Contest contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from susand3022
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HI Fonda, I like this 3-line poem. It speaks to the way life truly is. There's a lot out there to make the difficult things in life just, 'go away' if you don't want to deal with them.
I do have one suggestion for you; you may not want to capitalize The Way as it doesn't really make sense to do. He does show us the way, He always has, we just have to follow the path. :)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Prayer is the answer to many things that we cannot control. Your poem has brought many good thoughts this morning. I love your poem. 'No temptation has overtaken you except what is common to mankind. And God is faithful; he will not let you be tempted beyond what you can bear. But when you are tempted, he will also provide a way out so that you can endure it.'

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Fonda, a good three line poem in good 5/7/5 syllable form. Well worded. He laid the way for us to resist temptation - how many of us actually do I wonder. Thoughtful piece and I wish you good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Hi temptation is all over the place. They have always been there. But we human have allowed ourselves to be tempted and therefore got drowned. Jesus warned us, how many listen. This is the wonder.
This is a very good write indeed.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Fonda,
You've written an excellent three-line poem in the 5-7-5 form
expressing your belief that will resonate with many.
Well expressed with good choice of supportive picture.
Nicely done
Best wishes to you
Robert

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Gracie619
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How fantastic that in such a short poem and so few words that you were able to convey such a deep and reflective message! I enjoyed this with my morning tea as well as your author notes. Excellent work! Your message shall stick with me all day!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Raul1
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This is very good that you came up with this poem. I like it. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by Raul1 on 01-Feb-2020
    You're welcome.