Six Siblings - William
a brief bio18 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a very well documented bio of William, the youngest of six children. Is this you, Bill? It appears as a well-written autobiography of yourself, but you posted this under 'General Fiction'. I hope I am assuming right, when I say that, this is a non-fictional version of your life.
You lived an industrious life with many memories to be proud of. You went from point to point with a good flow of your bio. My father was in the U.S Air Force as a meteorologist and also, after retiring from the military, taught at UCLA in Los Angeles, CA. So, when he retired the second time, he had two pensions which helped my father and mother live long lives at a nice retirement community. I am proud of him, just as I'm sure your children and grandchildren are proud of you. Thank you for sharing your honorable bio with me.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This is a very well documented bio of William, the youngest of six children. Is this you, Bill? It appears as a well-written autobiography of yourself, but you posted this under 'General Fiction'. I hope I am assuming right, when I say that, this is a non-fictional version of your life.
You lived an industrious life with many memories to be proud of. You went from point to point with a good flow of your bio. My father was in the U.S Air Force as a meteorologist and also, after retiring from the military, taught at UCLA in Los Angeles, CA. So, when he retired the second time, he had two pensions which helped my father and mother live long lives at a nice retirement community. I am proud of him, just as I'm sure your children and grandchildren are proud of you. Thank you for sharing your honorable bio with me.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Fixed the nonfiction. Salute to you and your Airman slash professor dad. Thank you for the great review as well, Jesse.
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Hi Bill. I'm glad you changed it to nonfiction. Thank you for the salute for me and my dad. I'm glad you liked my review. You're very welcome.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very interesting brief bio about you. You used very good descriptive words. It sounds like you had a interesting life and a really good one now with your wife, children and grandchildren. Thank you for your service my friend. May God bless you and your family! Teri
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Bill, This is a very interesting brief bio about you. You used very good descriptive words. It sounds like you had a interesting life and a really good one now with your wife, children and grandchildren. Thank you for your service my friend. May God bless you and your family! Teri
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!
Comment from damommy
You've certainly had a full and exciting life. Thank you for sharing it with us. The spread in grandchildren's ages give you a wide range of interests.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You've certainly had a full and exciting life. Thank you for sharing it with us. The spread in grandchildren's ages give you a wide range of interests.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Yvonne
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing your
story, Bill.
-It is always interesting
to learn about FS members.
-You have certainly packed
a lot into your life so far.
-Thanks for your service
to your country, and all
of your efforts in so many
different capacities and places.
-Kudos to you, as well, for
getting your degree and
becoming a teacher, and your
33 year marriage and family.
-This was written very well
and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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-Thanks for sharing your
story, Bill.
-It is always interesting
to learn about FS members.
-You have certainly packed
a lot into your life so far.
-Thanks for your service
to your country, and all
of your efforts in so many
different capacities and places.
-Kudos to you, as well, for
getting your degree and
becoming a teacher, and your
33 year marriage and family.
-This was written very well
and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Pam
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You are quite welcome, Bill.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL: "chase warlords around" ... I had to giggle here!! ;) :) Great offering of Bill - the condensed version! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
station 1974 when --> station until 1974 when
Ft. Sill, Olahoma --> Ft. Sill, Oklahoma
Beirut, Lebonan --> Beirut, Lebanon
Assigned to Ft. Sill --> [at this point you stopped using complete sentences... which I'm sure you probably already knew, but I thought I'd point it out just in case... :)]
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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LOL: "chase warlords around" ... I had to giggle here!! ;) :) Great offering of Bill - the condensed version! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
station 1974 when --> station until 1974 when
Ft. Sill, Olahoma --> Ft. Sill, Oklahoma
Beirut, Lebonan --> Beirut, Lebanon
Assigned to Ft. Sill --> [at this point you stopped using complete sentences... which I'm sure you probably already knew, but I thought I'd point it out just in case... :)]
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Sheesh! I guess I rushed this to press a bit quickly. I know it?s hard to believe I taught English and grammar for a hundred years. I think my vision is failing. Either that or I?m just dumber and lazier each day.
Comment from Earl Corp
it's hard to believe you can boil your life down into such a small information packed essay. Lebonan should be Lebanon. I was in Germany in 83 when the Beirut bombing occurred.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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it's hard to believe you can boil your life down into such a small information packed essay. Lebonan should be Lebanon. I was in Germany in 83 when the Beirut bombing occurred.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I think Lebanon should change their spelling, Earl.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have has a long military life Bill and also had another career in teaching and I expect is seems to have gone in a flash! It is wonderful that you have had a long married life and have five grandchildren, I enjoyed reading your life story and I am sure you have lots of stories to tell too, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You have has a long military life Bill and also had another career in teaching and I expect is seems to have gone in a flash! It is wonderful that you have had a long married life and have five grandchildren, I enjoyed reading your life story and I am sure you have lots of stories to tell too, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was quite a bio, Bill, and what a lot you've put into your life. War is terrible, all those marines and sailors murdered that way, such cowards who did it. I'm glad you found happiness again, my friend. 33 years is a long time filled with love. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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That was quite a bio, Bill, and what a lot you've put into your life. War is terrible, all those marines and sailors murdered that way, such cowards who did it. I'm glad you found happiness again, my friend. 33 years is a long time filled with love. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Sandra
