God's Love
A free verse poem...8 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
You make great use of those infinitives. They add a very smooth, measured structure to you4 free verse. With your infinitive phrases, you have a nice build=up to your point in the last lines of each stanzas. You present a "to do" list in your first stanza, and in the second you list what it takes to do those things. Beautifully presented. judi
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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You make great use of those infinitives. They add a very smooth, measured structure to you4 free verse. With your infinitive phrases, you have a nice build=up to your point in the last lines of each stanzas. You present a "to do" list in your first stanza, and in the second you list what it takes to do those things. Beautifully presented. judi
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much! I actually write this many years ago. And I find the truth is still the same so many years later. Appreciate you kind review! xoxo
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You're very welcome. Have a great Sunday. judi
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Lent is soon here so we all have to focus what your poem says...Many times we forget what or Jesus did for us....to die for our sins is the biggest gift that we can receive. New life.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Lent is soon here so we all have to focus what your poem says...Many times we forget what or Jesus did for us....to die for our sins is the biggest gift that we can receive. New life.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Absolutely! And it is a lifelong journey to understand fully what his gift means. thanks for appreciating this journey! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
"Takes God's Love"
Says it all.
"God's Love"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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"Takes God's Love"
Says it all.
"God's Love"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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thanks Ricky! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
What a gorgeous piece of art and beautifully written poem, dear Diana. I'm not able to sleep and this helps me. Better than a cup of herbal tea. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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What a gorgeous piece of art and beautifully written poem, dear Diana. I'm not able to sleep and this helps me. Better than a cup of herbal tea. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Sorry to hear, my friend! I've had a cough keeping up for the last several night. So I know I am in good company. Finally got some Delsym 12 hour and it helped me sleep better last night. I'm glad this was there to support you last night! :) xoxoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really enjoyed this lovely poem. It is full of wisdom, sending a powerful message about how these much needed traits don't just ENTER us; they come from somewhere--GOD.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I really enjoyed this lovely poem. It is full of wisdom, sending a powerful message about how these much needed traits don't just ENTER us; they come from somewhere--GOD.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you Janice! It's definitely a lifetime journey here in these few words! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Ronni
Hi dear Diana,
Your simple yet ever basic reflections and advice is all the more
profound in the spiritual directives and incentives it takes to be
truly attuned to God's Love and live the life of purpose in accordace
to His Word and our salvation. Love the pic and music video, so
perfect with your message and theme.
Dear, dear Diana, sorry for the tardy review, seems I am going to
need a higher ladder
to keep up with your energy and prolific writings..LO.. will try to
catch up...been away a lot more lately due to Teacher Conferences..
and local church volunteerings....
Thanks for the inspiring write....
Love, blessings always, Ronni
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi dear Diana,
Your simple yet ever basic reflections and advice is all the more
profound in the spiritual directives and incentives it takes to be
truly attuned to God's Love and live the life of purpose in accordace
to His Word and our salvation. Love the pic and music video, so
perfect with your message and theme.
Dear, dear Diana, sorry for the tardy review, seems I am going to
need a higher ladder
to keep up with your energy and prolific writings..LO.. will try to
catch up...been away a lot more lately due to Teacher Conferences..
and local church volunteerings....
Thanks for the inspiring write....
Love, blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You never need to apologize, my friend. I just hope you always show up whenever you can :) I'm so happy you appreciated this piece. It's definitely a lifetime journey here in these few words! xoxo
Comment from Dancemom
This is a very creative free verse poem. This is well written and tells a great message about living life. I enjoyed how you took the items in the first stanza and explained in the second stanza how to find them. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This is a very creative free verse poem. This is well written and tells a great message about living life. I enjoyed how you took the items in the first stanza and explained in the second stanza how to find them. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks Heather! It's definitely a lifetime journey here in these few words! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Patty Palmer
A well-written poem! And it's all true. You have to go through lots of things to gain each step along the way. The most important one being to earn faith you need God's love.
This is really pretty, Diana!
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A well-written poem! And it's all true. You have to go through lots of things to gain each step along the way. The most important one being to earn faith you need God's love.
This is really pretty, Diana!
Patty
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you! It's definitely a lifetime journey here in these few words! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
