The Searchers
A short review of a movie, I like12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! You're actually doing it! Virtual six from me! I liked that you covered the lack problem with making the American Indians the bad guys. And I loved learning about the source of "that'll be the day!" Great job, Rikki!
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" We Know that" (know)
"In one scene one of the last remaining Buffalo" (comma after scene, buffalo is probably not capitalized and maybe use another word than "one" 2 times)
The word "display" is used twice in that paragraph so you might want to find a synonym. Just some ideas.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Hooray! You're actually doing it! Virtual six from me! I liked that you covered the lack problem with making the American Indians the bad guys. And I loved learning about the source of "that'll be the day!" Great job, Rikki!
Comments/Suggestions:
" We Know that" (know)
"In one scene one of the last remaining Buffalo" (comma after scene, buffalo is probably not capitalized and maybe use another word than "one" 2 times)
The word "display" is used twice in that paragraph so you might want to find a synonym. Just some ideas.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Rikki
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Vivid imagery re black-to-color and vice versa at the end. Not surprised about the stereotypical "evil Indians." Given which, I'm not clear on why you liked this film so much. What, specifically, impressed you about Wayne's performance? Cool about the Buddy Holly song! Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Vivid imagery re black-to-color and vice versa at the end. Not surprised about the stereotypical "evil Indians." Given which, I'm not clear on why you liked this film so much. What, specifically, impressed you about Wayne's performance? Cool about the Buddy Holly song! Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing
Rikki.
