He Is Building Us A New Home
Spiritual commentary,18 total reviews
Comment from Therese Caron
Lovely poem, written with such comforting words. The image you chose is beautiful and looks so nice with yellow background. This a poem to return to.
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Lovely poem, written with such comforting words. The image you chose is beautiful and looks so nice with yellow background. This a poem to return to.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from judiverse
A lovely statement in a few words and very encouraging to think God doesn't hold out pasts against us. There's a chance for all to enter Heaven, as long as we're His children. In your first line, you might want to use "children," because you use plural in the rest of your poem--"us." judi
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A lovely statement in a few words and very encouraging to think God doesn't hold out pasts against us. There's a chance for all to enter Heaven, as long as we're His children. In your first line, you might want to use "children," because you use plural in the rest of your poem--"us." judi
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Supe
Everybody has made a mistake once or twice in their lives. Good to know
God forgives us and doesn't hold our past against us. This is full of promise and hope, displayed beautifully. Love the picture. Good job.
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Everybody has made a mistake once or twice in their lives. Good to know
God forgives us and doesn't hold our past against us. This is full of promise and hope, displayed beautifully. Love the picture. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem Patricia filled with hope and promise that if we sin we will always be forgiven and accepted into Heaven, i liked your artwork too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A fine poem Patricia filled with hope and promise that if we sin we will always be forgiven and accepted into Heaven, i liked your artwork too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from RShipp
Enjoyed your poem!
I've requested a basketball court and a tennis court. The music doesn't have to be piped in any longer- It's provided by the angels.
Have a blessed weekend.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Enjoyed your poem!
I've requested a basketball court and a tennis court. The music doesn't have to be piped in any longer- It's provided by the angels.
Have a blessed weekend.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Each "sentence" (i.e. line pairs) is clear in itself; I'm not clear on the connection between them. All the best, poetess! (Now THAT's baaad.)
Cheers. LIZ
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Each "sentence" (i.e. line pairs) is clear in itself; I'm not clear on the connection between them. All the best, poetess! (Now THAT's baaad.)
Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from tfawcus
Sage advice for us too. It is always better to look forward than to look back. We cannot undo what has been done, but we can resolve to do better. Forgiveness is a good first step.
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Sage advice for us too. It is always better to look forward than to look back. We cannot undo what has been done, but we can resolve to do better. Forgiveness is a good first step.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Joan E.
My goodness--it is difficult to keep up with your output--you really must be feeling better, after losing so much weight! I enjoyed your spiritual reflection and the "new home" metaphor plus your depiction of the joyful iris. Cheers- Joan
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My goodness--it is difficult to keep up with your output--you really must be feeling better, after losing so much weight! I enjoyed your spiritual reflection and the "new home" metaphor plus your depiction of the joyful iris. Cheers- Joan
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
