Where Are You?
A Devotional27 total reviews
Comment from GE Parson
You brought a tear down my cheek. I felt your poem from start to finish. I've had few friends such as this one of whom you wrote, hence my tear. Your friend, Jetty
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You brought a tear down my cheek. I felt your poem from start to finish. I've had few friends such as this one of whom you wrote, hence my tear. Your friend, Jetty
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you, Jetty, for your kind review and all the stars!!! I visited Arlington two years ago, and this poem actually came to me in a dream a few nights ago, had to write it!
irish
Comment from royowen
You poured your soul into this and have learnt to let your imagination to flow before you, I rarely write a complete theme, but fro a starting let God's gift guide my hand, although most call it a very vague sounding muse. Beautifully written in emotive text. Written tetrametric quatrains and aabb rhyming, well done, blessing Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You poured your soul into this and have learnt to let your imagination to flow before you, I rarely write a complete theme, but fro a starting let God's gift guide my hand, although most call it a very vague sounding muse. Beautifully written in emotive text. Written tetrametric quatrains and aabb rhyming, well done, blessing Roy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Roy, for your kind review, and those stars!! I visited my friend at Arlington two years ago and this poem came to me in a dream a few nights ago, had to write it.
irish
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Good job
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Irishauthorme, a terrific Thursday to you. I really enjoyed your poem, it was a touching tribute to your long lost friend. The flow and rhymes were good and the story was told brilliantly, great job!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hello Irishauthorme, a terrific Thursday to you. I really enjoyed your poem, it was a touching tribute to your long lost friend. The flow and rhymes were good and the story was told brilliantly, great job!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you for your kind review, and the stars!! Visited him at Arlington two years ago and this poem actually came to me in a dream a few nights ago. Had to write it out.
irish
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about childhood memories and a play mate whom you found after years and still on your mind as much as it was many years ago.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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A very well-written poem about childhood memories and a play mate whom you found after years and still on your mind as much as it was many years ago.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you, took a while to get this right
irish
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent poem written with varying rhythm and AABB rhyme. I would give you six stars if I had it. You conveyed a vivid memory with very well chosen words that stir up emotions.
Bill
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Excellent poem written with varying rhythm and AABB rhyme. I would give you six stars if I had it. You conveyed a vivid memory with very well chosen words that stir up emotions.
Bill
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you Bill, as you guessed, this is a true story
irish
Comment from 24chas
This was a great read, irishauthorme. The rhyme scheme gave it a nice rhythm and flow which leads the reader to the sad ending. Well done, keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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This was a great read, irishauthorme. The rhyme scheme gave it a nice rhythm and flow which leads the reader to the sad ending. Well done, keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you, although this all happened years ago, took a while to get it right
irish
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a sad and poignant write and I hung onto every word here and your story is heartfelt and your rhymes well chosen. Superb flow and a joy to read, I wish I had a six for you because this write deserves one, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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This is such a sad and poignant write and I hung onto every word here and your story is heartfelt and your rhymes well chosen. Superb flow and a joy to read, I wish I had a six for you because this write deserves one, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you Dolly! You guessed right, this was from a true story, hard to get down and get right
irish
