Love Can't Move Mountains
A 5-7-5 poem31 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I have been in the hospital for four month sorry it took me so long to read your wonderful work
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they area a perfect math. I love when a writer can say so much with so few words.
Thank you Fr sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I have been in the hospital for four month sorry it took me so long to read your wonderful work
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they area a perfect math. I love when a writer can say so much with so few words.
Thank you Fr sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, and I do hope you feeling better****kahpot
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Your very welcome. you stay on praying ground.
Cookie
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Though love can't move mountains it is certainly the catalyst for many a wonderful deed. Those who are inspired by love are energized to the nth degree to do just about anything to prove it.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Though love can't move mountains it is certainly the catalyst for many a wonderful deed. Those who are inspired by love are energized to the nth degree to do just about anything to prove it.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Minglement
I really enjoyed this unique entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. I like your author note as well and your lovely illustration as well. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I really enjoyed this unique entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. I like your author note as well and your lovely illustration as well. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I am glad you liked this short work, your review and comments are much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome :)
Comment from RShipp
Your picture was a great choice with your 5-7-5 poem.
"circles their entirety" ... a great turn of phrase.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Poetry Writing contest.
I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Your picture was a great choice with your 5-7-5 poem.
"circles their entirety" ... a great turn of phrase.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Poetry Writing contest.
I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I like your version of faith, which is really the whole point of faith. Love is quite literally the very motivation that triggered the reason fo Jesus, a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I like your version of faith, which is really the whole point of faith. Love is quite literally the very motivation that triggered the reason fo Jesus, a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for reading this as intended, very much appreciated****kahot
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Well done
Comment from susand3022
Hi Kahpot, that's an amazing image and poem to go along with it. Love can indeed seem to move mountains, so far as I'm concerned... lol, I've seen it work miracles over time. :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi Kahpot, that's an amazing image and poem to go along with it. Love can indeed seem to move mountains, so far as I'm concerned... lol, I've seen it work miracles over time. :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your great comments and review
Comment from Therese Caron
A lovely 5-7-5 poem with great description, lovely wording, and an image that really complements your writing. This is a wonderful poem for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A lovely 5-7-5 poem with great description, lovely wording, and an image that really complements your writing. This is a wonderful poem for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, kahpot, I do so wish I wasn't out of sixes -- this is just so simply and beautifully stated!! ;) No, you're right, it can't but it sure makes us feel like it can with its touch, doesn't! :) Thanx so much for that smile and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Oh, kahpot, I do so wish I wasn't out of sixes -- this is just so simply and beautifully stated!! ;) No, you're right, it can't but it sure makes us feel like it can with its touch, doesn't! :) Thanx so much for that smile and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much, thought I would think about it a bit differently, as always very much appreciated
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello ****kahpot
Oh I don't know about moving mountains either. I've certainly done my best to move a couple, however, it doesn't work most of the time. lol. Your format count is perfect but, I'm shaking my head about that second line. What exactly are your circling again? I enjoyed the content and the humor (well I have a strange sense of humor) I see in this one. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hello ****kahpot
Oh I don't know about moving mountains either. I've certainly done my best to move a couple, however, it doesn't work most of the time. lol. Your format count is perfect but, I'm shaking my head about that second line. What exactly are your circling again? I enjoyed the content and the humor (well I have a strange sense of humor) I see in this one. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you Kiwi, I was hoping that it might read as "love can't move mountains" it would find away by circling them, as always much appreciated
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your well-chosen words for your contest entry, Kahpot. The syllables are correct per line, the image is a good pairing, and your message is clear. While love can't move mountains, it can move another person in a sense that can make him/her a better person. With love, everything is possible when one believes in their heart. When I say 'everything', I am referring to what is humanly possible. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You did a good job with your well-chosen words for your contest entry, Kahpot. The syllables are correct per line, the image is a good pairing, and your message is clear. While love can't move mountains, it can move another person in a sense that can make him/her a better person. With love, everything is possible when one believes in their heart. When I say 'everything', I am referring to what is humanly possible. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you Jan, yes I thought I would try and look at love a bit differently, as always much appreciated
