Stories of the Dreamtime
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Young Hunters"Aboriginal myths and legends.
4 total reviews
Comment from Thompson I
An excellent work. I love the story, the plot and the scene. Indeed it does no good amassing so much, just take what is needed. The earth spirit indeed tried misguiding the young hunters, thank God they didn't yield. Their compassionate heart and contentment finally paid off. Well done. A nice job.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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An excellent work. I love the story, the plot and the scene. Indeed it does no good amassing so much, just take what is needed. The earth spirit indeed tried misguiding the young hunters, thank God they didn't yield. Their compassionate heart and contentment finally paid off. Well done. A nice job.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much new friend. So glad you enjoyed the message in the story. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Alchera
I do like it for its subject matter of which I am fond of.
Beautifully penned and easy to read also for children accept for the pronunciation of the Aborigine words that should be added I think within the foot notes. The walk about story lined content is interesting with its daily spiritual moral and right behaviour and preservation of Mother Earth due to the Dream time educational rules. There is a printng mistake at the eighth paragraph: argueing/arguì gli.Thank for sharing.
Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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I do like it for its subject matter of which I am fond of.
Beautifully penned and easy to read also for children accept for the pronunciation of the Aborigine words that should be added I think within the foot notes. The walk about story lined content is interesting with its daily spiritual moral and right behaviour and preservation of Mother Earth due to the Dream time educational rules. There is a printng mistake at the eighth paragraph: argueing/arguì gli.Thank for sharing.
Great job!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Bon Giorno Tony! Thanks for reading and enjoying my little chapter for young people. Hope you are well? Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Carl DeVere
A pretty good narrative that takes you right into some time-honored hunting bush with several points of view as characters. I like the inclusion of a spirit or one not of this world. These days not many would listen or even think about other levels of awareness. Good education about native language.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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A pretty good narrative that takes you right into some time-honored hunting bush with several points of view as characters. I like the inclusion of a spirit or one not of this world. These days not many would listen or even think about other levels of awareness. Good education about native language.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Hello Carl, Thanks so much for your understanding of our culture.
I like to tell Americans about our myths and legends. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, this is a very nice chapter to your book, Kace. Well written and interesting. I enjoyed your folk tale and the meaning of your story of the boy hunters and the animals. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Oh, this is a very nice chapter to your book, Kace. Well written and interesting. I enjoyed your folk tale and the meaning of your story of the boy hunters and the animals. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Something different for you to ponder on, eh? All our stories have a lesson. Thank you Marilyn XXXK.
