This Place Is No Place Fer Jake
Slang, double subjects and illiteration intended47 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
You have painted quite the image here, sitting out in the middle of nowhere while your training, I like the use of your slang in this read, very well written****kahpot
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You have painted quite the image here, sitting out in the middle of nowhere while your training, I like the use of your slang in this read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from Barbaraj1
Jake, you gave us an amusing poem, dialect and all. I guess your buddies
heard Kentucky and thought you were a hillbilly. If they read any of your poems, they would know you were far from semi-literate.
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Jake, you gave us an amusing poem, dialect and all. I guess your buddies
heard Kentucky and thought you were a hillbilly. If they read any of your poems, they would know you were far from semi-literate.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing that poem from your youth, Jaybird. That must have been such a harrowing time to be away from home and to have to go through military training in a completely different world.
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Thank you for sharing that poem from your youth, Jaybird. That must have been such a harrowing time to be away from home and to have to go through military training in a completely different world.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What an awesome offering, Jaybird, from your pen of the past to the eyes of its future (us!) -- awesome, sir!! ;) Even then you were a poet...hillbilly not withstanding - LOL!! ;) :) Thoroughly enjoyed! ;)
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What an awesome offering, Jaybird, from your pen of the past to the eyes of its future (us!) -- awesome, sir!! ;) Even then you were a poet...hillbilly not withstanding - LOL!! ;) :) Thoroughly enjoyed! ;)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from royowen
What a very fun poem my friend, I've always liked this sort of poetry, where it doesn't take itself seriously but takes the route to the range, making the wild untamed places of nature and the mind. Well done, good post, blessings Roy
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What a very fun poem my friend, I've always liked this sort of poetry, where it doesn't take itself seriously but takes the route to the range, making the wild untamed places of nature and the mind. Well done, good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really enjoyed the dialect and the sentiments! I could hear this hillbilly speak and the voice was meaningful and innocent. I enjoyed your words, very clever and entertaining, especially for an English woman, love Dolly x
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I really enjoyed the dialect and the sentiments! I could hear this hillbilly speak and the voice was meaningful and innocent. I enjoyed your words, very clever and entertaining, especially for an English woman, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from Sally Law
This is darling really. I haven't seen this side of you as your poetry is so eloquently penned. This was fun and fresh.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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This is darling really. I haven't seen this side of you as your poetry is so eloquently penned. This was fun and fresh.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
