Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

This is so wonderful that you share
this bond.
I am close like this to my one sister
in Arizona, but not really my brothers.
Just beautiful Miss Portia!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Judy,

Thanks so much for your review. I pray for that bond with my remaining two sister. My sister that passed in 2010 we were very close, she is the reason why I write poetry today.
Blessings & HUGS... Portia

reply by Irish Rain on 23-Jan-2020

A wonderful tribute to her!! Big hugs to you!!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello pharp
Great contest entry for the 5 line contest
I read you authors note and you five lines, smile it's so nice to have a brother and not break the chain so you can be around you when you need help.
Gert

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Hi Gert,

Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a wonderful tribute and awesome description of strong family ties - an exceptional feat in only 19 syllables! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and best wishes. Blessings Portia

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with this 5-7-7 and as you seem to address your big brother, I think it meets the contest rules to address a loved one. It's a beautiful thing to be so close as siblings even after both are grown.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much Helen, for your review. Greatly appreciated...Portia