Such is Faith
Reflections and realizations through life60 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
How appropriate. A rocket scientist describing her faith in "stages" and not only acknowledging the existence of "space angels " but also relying on them. I love the picture above the dark blue sky background which illustrates your heavenly words. Wish I still had ******!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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How appropriate. A rocket scientist describing her faith in "stages" and not only acknowledging the existence of "space angels " but also relying on them. I love the picture above the dark blue sky background which illustrates your heavenly words. Wish I still had ******!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Susan -- not one for the 'preaching', but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Take care, my friend and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
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Will be celebrating the Year of the Rat with my Asian friends tomorrow. Gung Hay Fat Choy (Good Fortune) to you.
Comment from Peter Gardner
I love the flow of the poem. It progresses as you age and angels are still there. The cadence changes through the stanzas but is easy to pick up. I believe angels are always around us, watching, protecting, and helping. This is a well written piece that makes us see those angels!
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I love the flow of the poem. It progresses as you age and angels are still there. The cadence changes through the stanzas but is easy to pick up. I believe angels are always around us, watching, protecting, and helping. This is a well written piece that makes us see those angels!
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Such is Faith'
Is a Faith Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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"Such is Faith'
Is a Faith Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank for your review!
Comment from Drew Delaney
I like the short lines and the rhythm and flow of this faith poem. Your presentation with the different colour stanzas is different and nice. Mostly I really like certain stanzas that spoke to me. Nice job!
Drew
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I like the short lines and the rhythm and flow of this faith poem. Your presentation with the different colour stanzas is different and nice. Mostly I really like certain stanzas that spoke to me. Nice job!
Drew
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Drew -- not one for the 'preaching', but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Be sure to stop by again some time -- door's always open! ;) :) Take care out there and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your poem Such is Faith was a great entry for the faith contest. The color scheme and picture fit well with the poem. The only suggestion I would make is to classify the poem as spiritual and not general.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Your poem Such is Faith was a great entry for the faith contest. The color scheme and picture fit well with the poem. The only suggestion I would make is to classify the poem as spiritual and not general.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Mackenzie -- not one for the 'preaching', but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Be sure to stop by again some time -- door's always open! ;) :) Take care out there and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful poem Yvette and it's true when we are aging our way of Faith
changes and when we get older and have experienced a lot, we have to admit, yes Angels are watching over us... A well written poem and a pleasure to read. Fia
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Wonderful poem Yvette and it's true when we are aging our way of Faith
changes and when we get older and have experienced a lot, we have to admit, yes Angels are watching over us... A well written poem and a pleasure to read. Fia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Fia -- not one for the 'preaching', but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Take care, my friend and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from pome lover
well, Ms prolific, another winner and a really lovely one, Yvette.
I love the idea of faith and how it's perceived at different stages of a person's life.
Congratulations on All time Best!
(PS - I think you're the energizer bunny)
Katharine - pome
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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well, Ms prolific, another winner and a really lovely one, Yvette.
I love the idea of faith and how it's perceived at different stages of a person's life.
Congratulations on All time Best!
(PS - I think you're the energizer bunny)
Katharine - pome
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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LOL! Thanx for your exuberance and smiles this morning, Katharine -- you make facing those papers to grade in a little while a little less 'haunting' - LOL!! ;) :) You know, I'm not one for the 'preaching', but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Take care over there, my LoneStar friend, and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
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you, too!
K
Comment from juliaSjames
A well written poem in your signature style, Yvette. We may and do change throughout our lives but divine love remains the same. There are so many takes on faith..I think your circle of faith poem is one of the best in concept and in execution.
Best wishes for the contest, my friend.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A well written poem in your signature style, Yvette. We may and do change throughout our lives but divine love remains the same. There are so many takes on faith..I think your circle of faith poem is one of the best in concept and in execution.
Best wishes for the contest, my friend.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Julia -- not one for the 'preaching', but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Take care, my friend and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
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Sometimes we have more faith than we think.
Comment from dkblack
This is beautifully done. The picture, the words, the colors you have used, all of it! I love how you have applied "faith" to every season of our lives, telling each one so precisely!
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This is beautifully done. The picture, the words, the colors you have used, all of it! I love how you have applied "faith" to every season of our lives, telling each one so precisely!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Oh, DK, thank you, THANK YOU for such a wonderful review and those bright, shiny stars! ;) Know you probably don't know it, but I'm not one for the 'preaching', although I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Take care, my friend and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
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You are welcome. You have a great weekend also!
Comment from royowen
I love the fact that my daily life and trials teach me character, but it's my faith that gives me confidence, and the foundation for my daily walk. Just love this very articulate and beautifully penned this poetic narrative Yvette, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I love the fact that my daily life and trials teach me character, but it's my faith that gives me confidence, and the foundation for my daily walk. Just love this very articulate and beautifully penned this poetic narrative Yvette, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Roy -- I definitely don't have your 'preacher pen' (wink, wink), but I do think faith is a deeply personal thing that is part of us as we 'travel' life's highways... :) :) Take care, my friend and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
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Well done
