Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I choose to live life each day - I think that is a standout positive message in your poem. It's up to us how we choose to live, with a smile or a frown, preferably a smile. Lovely verse Patricia, well said.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Good advice, when you live your life as it is the last day you supposed to make the best of it; sometimes people choose the reckless side other time they make amendments

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is the only way to live at any age and we always get the most out of life this way. I enjoyed your neat rhyming here Patricia, wise words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

So true. There's nothing we can do about the past except learn from it and move on. If we don't then our past will define us. What a beautifully written poem with a strong message behind it, very nicely done.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Great advice, as of yet, I still have a hard time living in the moment. Unfortunately my mind races. I need to just trust in the Lord to take care of tomorrow. I can't change the past, but I can live for a better tomorrow.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

Wow ! here is wisdom indeed and told beautifully in these poetic lines- short format can be powerful to get message across- with both sincerity and trust -

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for reminding us to live each day to its fullest and hold on to good memories from the past. Here's to more, positive future experiences. I admired your spiritual poem and lovely presentation. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

How lovely your verse is Patricia. It is so comforting to make peace with our past when we realize that the Lord has forgiven all of it. Your pretty artwork is such a nice accompaniment to your poem. Well done.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from Therese Caron

Exceptional

I know this is a very simple poem and I think some people save the sixes for the complex ones. I give sixes to the poems I can FEEL. This poem says all we need to know in life. If it said " love your neighbor" somewhere, it could be a bible. Beautiful.

Terry C.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I liked this poem about leaving our past with God and doing our best in the present to honor him. I think it would be even better if you chose to develop a consistent meter for the lines.
Bill

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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