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As If It Is My Last

Yesterdays, tomorrows and today.

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Comment from juliaSjames
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If only we could focus on each day and on each minute of each day, how much richer our lives would be. How much more energy we would have at our disposal. Thank you for this powerful short verse that reminds us to treasure each moment.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020


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Comment from Nottoway
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One of the most concise statements ever about life. I too look at where I have been and think of where I am going or would like to go. But, most of all there is great joy in where I am. So much pleasure in little things.

Very well penned effort.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020


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Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
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Good motto to live by and you express it so nicely in your spiritual poem. Ought to make one value life even more when lived with such a determination as you stated eloquently.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020


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Comment from susand3022
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Hello Pat, you are so right... all we can do is live each day to the fullest. In my case, it seems to be documenting things and helping out my parents. Here's to today! :)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020


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Comment from BeasPeas
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This is excellent, Patricia, and I agree with you. The past helps us not to repeat mistakes, not letting them carry on into the future. Art work is very nice. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is an excellent philosophy of life, and one that we would all do well to abide by. I think we would then be more optimistic, and lead a more productive, fulfilled life.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written spiritual poem. We all have to live each day as if it is our last day. We cannot know if we will see the sun rising tomorrow so we must make sure today was lived well.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


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Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I caught an end rhyme with 'last' and 'past' in this six line poem that is full of affirmation and gung-ho enthusiasm. I like this line: "God may have tomorrows/yet ahead for me." Thank you for posting with a pretty flower picture.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


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Comment from May 1
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This is a great poem that I feel carries an important message for everyone. We should all live in the now because we don't know how many tomorrows we might have. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


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Comment from kiwigirl2821
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I remember a saying about this. It goes something like this, yesterday has already happened and is now in the history books. Nothing can be done to change it but we can learn. I love the idea of your poem. It's a beauty. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


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