Punchinello
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Punchinello Chapter Nine"Terror strikes the Texas town of Astatula. Can She
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
A great sensory image: "Dewey studied the wiring on the so-called booby-trapped door."
Slipping in a strong sample of alliteration serves the reader cause to pause: " The shady characters they pursued filled the seedy side of life." The s's give a nice hissing effect. We'll be back.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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A great sensory image: "Dewey studied the wiring on the so-called booby-trapped door."
Slipping in a strong sample of alliteration serves the reader cause to pause: " The shady characters they pursued filled the seedy side of life." The s's give a nice hissing effect. We'll be back.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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It took me a while to find it so I can continue the book. I wrote it down so I can get back faster
Comment from Sankey
Another very descriptive chapter. Just sorry we don't have any more SIXES till Sunday. mate. I presume Punchinello is somewhere around listening to all this discussion?
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Another very descriptive chapter. Just sorry we don't have any more SIXES till Sunday. mate. I presume Punchinello is somewhere around listening to all this discussion?
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. As always, much appreciate the review.
Comment from Mistydawn
That doesn't sound good a mission of self-destruction, taking down anyone who gets in his way. I do hope they find the guy soon. I'm glad that she's alright. Well, besides the large bump. Your chapter is well-written, interesting. Your plot is believable and your character's really come to life.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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That doesn't sound good a mission of self-destruction, taking down anyone who gets in his way. I do hope they find the guy soon. I'm glad that she's alright. Well, besides the large bump. Your chapter is well-written, interesting. Your plot is believable and your character's really come to life.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Ricky1024
I think I missed your previous chapter with a killing.
But this is basically a gathering.
A talk on many events.
Thanks and I'll hit you back up!
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Here's to more blood and Gore!
Ricky
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I think I missed your previous chapter with a killing.
But this is basically a gathering.
A talk on many events.
Thanks and I'll hit you back up!
...
Here's to more blood and Gore!
Ricky
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Astatula Assassin this is one hell of a "hero", serial killer and cannibal in the same time. Killing for fun is this a full time job? These are all questions that are going through my mind. Who is this guy?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Astatula Assassin this is one hell of a "hero", serial killer and cannibal in the same time. Killing for fun is this a full time job? These are all questions that are going through my mind. Who is this guy?
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow a whole lotta heads and fire power to help out with this 'manhunt'... glad to see that they've figured out the 'crazy' part... you really know how to set them up, Brett! ;) Oh, and the doorbell was a fun detail! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Wow a whole lotta heads and fire power to help out with this 'manhunt'... glad to see that they've figured out the 'crazy' part... you really know how to set them up, Brett! ;) Oh, and the doorbell was a fun detail! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I thought a barking doorbell would add to the story. In reality, they do exist. Appreciate the review.
